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Originally Posted by ManPuppy
If we're talking about the death of the corporation, why is all the transitional imagery big, stark city skylines and bustling traffic? Why wouldn't you show small a corner mom and pop store; something fun like a candy shop, maybe with the happy owner making warm contact with a regular customer, getting an internet order and hand-writing a thank you note to put in the shipping container?
And why are all the monologues from men - most of whom aren't even attractive? Rule number one of mainstream marketing is, Put a pretty girl on the cover.
And ditto, what everyone else said about the music, lack of smiles, and paradigm shifts.
Re-shoot. But first, think about it. Your budget should have little to do with your thought process.
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Yeah, I did city stuff to show how big, big business is, so it would resonate how intense it is for small business to beat them. I chose the music and told the actors to be serious to give the same effect. I'm not a director or have a very artistic mind I just envisioned something that seemed shocking, dramatic, and mysterious.
If small business did beat corporations for once that would be unbelievably shocking.
I realized I didn't use a girl the day after. Damn it! I'll do new version with some hot chicks when I'm in Costa Rica for sure.
I wouldn't claim it's even close to a masterpiece, for $40 and an hour of editing though, I think it's pretty awesome. And if small business does take over someday (fingers crossed) maybe it will get put in a library.