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Originally Posted by Roald
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Damn this site looks hot.
Here are my thoughts.
#1 I like the top image. Very sexy.
#2 the moving gif is great. Close up, sexy, sensual. Gives great vibe of what the site is about.
So some ideas.
#1 Your 404 page. I'd make your 404 page go to a specific 404 page that looks like your join page. For example have your join box on that page and then an message that says sorry the page you are looking for isn't available but join now and get access to all of our content. Something like that. We did this on Twistys and saw a very nice uptick in sales. It's not going to add 20 a day but it's going to add more than you have now
#2 The tour feels a little bit light on content. Is it a new site? If it is I would emphasize that and date your content. I would say how the hottest adult site has launched, updates every x days.
#3 I'd add the model's full name. No reason not to.
#4 The content looks really really fuckin hot but this feels like a one page ad. I think you could really hide your lack of content by expanding on the preview you offer. I'd have each preview go to another page with a full 30 second trailers (highest res) and 8 high res photo previews. Why? Because this content is SO SO SO good you have to see it to believe it. Just an animated gif does it no justice. So instead of landing on this page and getting only 2 animated gifs give the surfer 9 pages to view with high quality trailers and photos. This isn't easily implemented which is why i listed it as #4. I know it may go against what many are doing with tours today but this content looks so good I feel people seeing it in full high def would be the clincher. The trailers don't even have to be elaborate they just have to show the same hotness you have in the gif but in large format.
#5 i feel this layout is 50% preview and 50% text but the text adds absolutely nothing to the sale of the content. I imagine 97% won't even read (besides model name). I know it is filler. I would try to fill with some other data. If you have active members maybe set ratings, votes, comments. If I saw the first scene Taking the Lead and instead of the text it said 394 Votes, 9.4 Rating, 122 Comments. That would get me thinking HOLY SHIT that must be hot content. Something along those lines. Maybe set up the tour so the votes and rating and comments move daily. Votes increase by x amount a day, rating fluctuates up and down daily and comments go up x amount per day.
#6 Just checked it on mobile as well. Looks great. I'd lower the text/text size. As i scroll on an iphone 7 most of the screen is text then thumbnail then text.
Really nice site. Love it! Hope it does well.
