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Old 09-06-2017, 03:50 AM  
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Originally Posted by sarettah View Post
Marriage in the Bible



Stage 2 makes a nice little outline for a possible script.

Not sure how you get the married part because maidens by definition are not married but you could work around that part I would think. Instead of maidens they are the Bride's sisters, all of whom have married before her.

Then the Groom arrives and with him are all the husbands of the Bride's sisters.

The Bride and Groom go into the room together and there you have a nice little tender one on one scene. A very clean style love scene of the newly weds figuring each other out.

Swing to the room with the Sisters and husbands all getting a touch drunk and they are discussing what is going on in the next room. This leads naturally into a group sex scene.

Back and forth between the 2 scenes, Bride and Groom, Sisters with Husbands.

They all finish up together and when the Bride and Groom come out of the room there is no clue of the group sex scene any more.

Proceed to wedding feast

and close.

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Thanks!
I really like the scenario you've provided and I also like the idea of Woody Allen inspired comedy. To this extent I've taken a walk in the Jewish neighbourhoods and I see how they dress and the project won't be as hard as I thought it would be. It's almost a 70s porn set up.

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Wow. That's a razor's edge you have to walk there.
Agreed but it looks do-able.
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