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Originally Posted by PR_Glen
There's some gold in here and this is better than your others but some things to consider:
1. poop jokes are hacky, don't do it. its childish, gross and off putting for most especially with visuals. I guess the doors were opened a bit with the emoji movie and one of the characters is a poop emoji but there is a difference between an animated icon with eyes and shit falling out of a beard! heh
2. Shorten it up! 4 mins is long for a comedic bit. save you some animation work too. Edit!
3. do not politicize your humour out of context like that. 'triggered' is a polarizing word. When you use words like that it takes people away from the joke and stirs up the wrong emotions. Non political humour is supposed to be universal, or at least free from politics or religion. By placing a trolling trump shot in there you remove the bit away from comedy for all and make things politically motivated instead. Saying that, if this were a politically centred skit it would make more sense.
animation was amazing, that chewy part was great and rey walking up the steps in those boots were hilarious though.
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Thanks. And you probably wouldn't expect it but i mostly agree with your points, except for the 'shit jokes', they really can be funny. It's a matter of taste. But yes, it is a bit too long. My favourite animation and best joke i made is a dutch cartoon of 30 seconds with a brilliant joke, that doesn't translate to english unfortunately.
I also agree about being non political. Those jokes are the best. But i do think this last Trump joke is funny to anti trumpsters as well as pro trumpsters or anyone in between: for antis who can still see humor in everything, it's ridiculous and unexpected, for pros it's laughing at the misery of the group who is hysterically 'triggered' at anything trump.
I'm probably my own biggest critic, i can see flaws in everything i make. The cartoon i like the best and is the funniest in my opinion is the walking dead one i did, the flow, jokes, etc. is in my opinion the best i've done for this channel
