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Old 08-26-2018, 08:06 AM  
Arnox
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Originally Posted by Adraco View Post
I agree that Yoast may not be an accurate determinant och "good language". However, sentences containing 20 or more words are rare. It rather shows lack of effective punctuation and is something I would consider bad writing. A single sentence here or there, can absolutely contain more than 20 words. No problem at all, the problem arise when that is the norm. In good writing, of high language quality, you don't have 20 words in a regular sentence.
The way I structure sentences can often mean I have over 20 words, but it flows and reads just fine. I use hyphens a lot - I believe it's a lot nicer to read.

For instance, here's a lengthy sentence from a review I provided:

"To check out the content, I downloaded 11 different videos and I have to say – this place is really taking sensual smut to a whole new level of interesting."

I've tried several different review methods over the years and A/B tested with clients to get the format down. I'm more than confident that my approach to writing - and my inclusion of sentences over 20 words apiece - is totally fine when it comes to user engagement.
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