btw, if he said he was delivering by friday. isnt he perfectly on time when delivering on friday?
(by, not before??)
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Originally Posted by Grisey
If it didn't reply in one word answers, also from my asking for writers thread i asked for everything to be laid out into sections, this also wasn't done, The examples he sent they weren't as my completed reviews.
So examples of what i asked for were sent, https://www.xcopywriters.com/portfolio/
https://www.xcopywriters.com/portfol...ms/porn-deals/
The examples on Fengs site and totally different
1 of the paragraphs contains more than the recommended maximum of 150 words. Are you sure all information is about the same topic, and therefore belongs in one single paragraph?
Bad SEO score 45.8% of the sentences contain more than 20 words, which is more than the recommended maximum of 25%. Try to shorten the sentences.
Good SEO score The copy scores 63 in the Flesch Reading Ease test, which is considered OK to read.
Good SEO score The amount of words following each of the subheadings doesn't exceed the recommended maximum of 300 words, which is great.
Good SEO score 33.3% of the sentences contain a transition word or phrase, which is great.
Good SEO score 7.4% of the sentences contain passive voice, which is less than or equal to the recommended maximum of 10%.
Then my shit which is mostly Red.
Its all good tho i'll re write them all green myself  |
well i get it wasnt how you wanted it ofc. but you find yoast score important. i for example might follow a other seo guideling according to writing/readability. Not sure how the writer was supposed to know what YOU find important, if you didnt tell him.
When i place a job at a writer, i generally type out what style i want, what rules it has to abide by etc.
(i guess its good for both sides that this seemed to have been a rather small order :P)