The key I've found to finding good partners is a good outline of what I'm looking for. Seems like the two of you may have not defined what each were looking for, live and learn from your mistakes
After you have defined what you want, it's best to break it down into a small test to make sure that you will be able to work together well.
If I was trying someone out for the very first time, I'd only do 1 review, to make sure we are on the same page. I realize this can be a pain in the ass, but it increases your odd's of success
I read the review that you sent over, and yes I would describe it as a bit wordy, and could be fine tuned to make it better, but that is where the need for a small back and forth between buyer and seller, to get them on the same page. I've never used Arnox for a writing service, but from what I have seen on the board, he seems to be an honest broker. Had the two of you done the first review, from there worked out the kinks, I think that he would have provided you with what you were looking for.
As for you being a douche about "by friday - on friday" , aren't we all
I know what it takes to make $100 in this business, and no one wants to waste his/her dollars on something that isn't going to make us some more money. And we by no means what to have to wait for it. Maybe should also clarify when a project it due, i.e. Aug 31st @ 2pm CST that way everyone is again on the same page.
Please, in the future, both of you - make sure and be very clear about what your looking for. Do it in small steps, and build good relations that can be called upon in the future to make many more $$$'s for both of you
Good luck
