Not to sound like an ass, but I think it's lazy writing.
For example, who is going to be interested in watching the protagonist bone the evil guy's mother and GF? This ain't 2001!
If you want to sell tickets, you've gotta slap the word "step" in front of everything... kids love that shit, you know.
Let me fix that script for you...
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Originally Posted by lezinterracial
So good guy fucks bad guy's girlfriend, stepsister and stepmom. Then kicks his ass and stops the bad guy from destroying the world. The film closes with a shot of the stepmom and stepsis hitting the shower together.
As an easter egg, have the happy family sing some topless karaoke in the shower together. While they can be seen holding good guy's wiener in their hands, fully unaware of the fact that they aren't actually holding a real microphone in hand. Considering nobody wears glasses in the shower and both babes having a bad eye-sight, such scenario seems legit, also leaves room for a sequel.
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I suggest you replace the mom with the stepmom character, and also include the additional stepsister character.
Perhaps even cast two actresses of the exact same age for both roles. That way, you can leave it up to the viewer to figure out for themselves which actress is suppose to be who. Everyone always enjoys a good mystery to solve.
You may steal this idea, free of charge...
As long as the DVD box includes a photo of a horse with a dildo strapped on top of his head, kinda making him look like a unicorn. You must also sparkle glitters over the horse to make him look all shiny. Thank you.
