nice skillz on display but go to that 'TeenPassions' design - this is a teen niche site and look at the model chosen as the main focal point.
a 23 year old with fake tits?
http://www.amkingdom.com
http://www.karupspc.com
http://www.alsscan.com
http://www.teendreams.com
http://www.teenflood.com
5 of the top teen sites on the Net, the first three are in a league of their own. notice anything?
did the client choose that photo or he left it up to you?
design is waaaaaaaaaaaaaay overrated - no, wrong, design is not over rated, Photoshop wizardry is what is over rated.