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Originally posted by xxweekxx
Hey your site looks good but u might wanna fix some errors. Who wrote up the wording on that site? get some pro to edit and make it sound professional.
Example from rules page - http://www.serious-partners.com/rules.html -
6. Do not use auto referral: it means you couldn't register and than register again like refer.
7. All fraudulent activity will be monitored. All fraudulent transactions will be investigated so we will find reseller who made this. Do not try to cheat us
8. Please read FAQ page before contacting webmaster.
Also
You use http://www.serious-partners.com/rules.html as your terms and conditions. You might want to look at other sites' terms before making yours up.
Also from http://www.serious-partners.com/sites.html
"Our brand is new teenager video site. "
Bad english..
What i suggest is you go hire a pro and make your site sound better. Right now it looks like a joke..
Reading your site hurts
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yes, i know, we have some errors, - will fix...
p.s. thanks for real suggestions, unlike smb..