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Originally posted by Amputate Your Head
sorry to be the bringer of bad news, but the composition of that site is horrible. There are so many things wrong with it, I don't even know where to begin.... but let's try
1. It doesn't entice me to do anything except close the window. Without that, nothing else listed below matters, because no one will get that far.
2. Would definately check into the legality of using Playboy's gear. And if you do have the okay, I'm sure it probably doesn't include the mangled display of their emblem.
3. the code is sloppy and your exits don't work.
4. the site warning down at the bottom (that is copied directly from adult.com sites btw... ) is missing the 18 U.S.C. 2257 statement
5. the graphic work... the cutouts, the comp, the text work, the navigation, all of it... is just completely lacking any semblance of what would be considered "good" work.
6. the images in the thumbs on the tour pages are positively atrocious.
My recommendation is, start completely over.
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I agree.
Neriah this is good advice, while AMP is not the best designer out there, he is very good and getting better and he definitely knows his stuff. I am really impressed he would take the time to give you some pointers !
