Yeah, but this started out with spamofon.
Sorry, got a phone call. Fuck. Is this due tomorrow?
Your spelling is all correct, but some of the grammar isn't. I started fooling with it, but I'm ending up rewriting the whole damn thing. If you don't have to have it now I'd rather do it tomorrow. Plus, it still needs to sound like you wrote it. I'm not changing your conclusions, whether I agree or not.
This part:
Outline:
Topic: Animal Farm.
Theme: Napoleon uses different techniques to control the animals on the farm.
Topic Sentence: Napoleon, the main character in Animal Farm, finds multiple ways to obtain and maintain power over all the animals.
Supporting Points:
? Napoleon obtains power primarily by elimination.
? Napoleon uses education and learning to help him obtain and maintain power.
? Napoleon uses violence to gain power over the animals.
Conclusion:
To obtain and maintain power, Napoleon uses manipulation to win the loyalty of the other farm animals. Through persuasion and propaganda, he brainwashes them and uses violence in his quest to achieve and hold on to his power. The author attempts to convey a warning about propaganda and absolute power, sending a message to the reader that he or she should not be easily influenced or fall victim to methods similar to those used by Napoleon to obtain and maintain his supremacy. Through Orwell?s writing, the reader learns a series of lessons that are metaphorically conveyed in the story named Animal Farm.
I'm also not sure about that "the story named" deal. You need to underline all your book titles, too.