I finally made the main graphic for my first AVS. Up 'till now I've been doing just TGP stuff. 
Following the advice of Idinternet. I'll be making one of these a week. 
I need your feedback. But brutally honest. Don't hold back. 
Don't worry, I can take it. It's the only way to improve.  
 http://www.usexfan.com/sexfan/coed-01/
 http://www.usexfan.com/sexfan/coed-01/ 
(The images are there, but the galleries aren't built yet.)
So what do you think? Does the graphic work? Does it draw you in? Is the wording ok? 
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