Could be a few things....
The sample you listed only has 1 recip. Most TGP's want more than just their recip. so they see some traffic back. You also split the gall in half with a banner, some large TGP's are anal about that. Also, that drunkslut banner has fake looking thumbs in it... but that's a stretch cuz it's animated so anyone declining it for that reason is being way too strict.
That's all I see from looking at it real quick. It also takes more than 2 days to get listed at a lot of places. Keep trying
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