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Looks a damn site better than mine...
Only thing I don't see is a call to action. As I have always understood it consumers need to be told what to do.. ie. CLICH HERE or SEE ME NOW and so on.
Since you are working with a much cuter girl than I ever seem to.. I would change the bottom from "hope you love my page" to "If you really love me click here now!"
But these are words from an amateur...
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