every paysite out there has 150,000 hot teen movies, 200+ live sex shows, 100,000+ erotic stories... not going to join unless you can offer them something good or original. but i have the feeling you already knew that.
maybe some shots of the member area would spice it up a bit, a la hustler.com where they have the shots of their movie players (second page, bottom right)
looks pretty basic, not too impressive... like it was made in macromedia fireworks? hmm, anyway. its not that bad but it needs work, looks a little pale.
on another note... that tour will look tiny on a high resolution. how about expanding the length of it, to make it longer.