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Originally Posted by The Ghost
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As far as content goes, it looks decent for the theme of the site. However, on some design notes there is a lot of text and I dont think most surfers will read it.
While I dont know what other webmasters would say, but I always think its good to have an image of a really hot model looking directly at the camera - its like they are looking right at the surfer and are flirting or cruising them.
Also, you might want to play up the kind of "naughty" aspects of it. Some text from your site "The shy straight stud you see at the movies making out with his girlfriend." - its good text, so play up that angle and give the site a sexy, forbidden angle... like its the surfer and the model's dirty little secret.
then again just my two cents
