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PornHustler · 03-17-2012, 01:13 PM

I am curious what style of writing would sell better or has more upside of the choices below.

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#1

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#2

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A sexy, young black girl gets it on with her boyfriend in the bathroom. She strips herself naked, showing off a sexy, young body with firm breasts and a cleanly shaved pussy. She started touching herself, which extremely arouses her boyfriend. She then gives her boyfriend a blowjob, taking him fully into her mouth and throat, licking and sucking her cock with delight.Then, when she cannot contain her horniness anymore, she had her wet, hot pussy fucked by boyfriend's huge, hot cock. Watch her moan and grind her pussy as she reaches climax.

#3

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Coffee and milk are perfect together! This hot ebony chick taking naked pictures of herself in the washroom for his white boyfriend to look at and use as a masturbation material later while she is at the mall will surely make you drool for ?someone? dark to eat. You won?t let her leave without your cock cleaned in her mouth then stuffed deep in her wet pussy first if she happens to be your girlfriend. And that is exactly what her boyfriend did. Watch this sexy girl get ravaged in all fours and you will definitely agree in the end that this is one of the best interracial porn video ever. Make sure you won?t spill your milk carelessly after watching.

Personally I like number 1 minus the "blackgfs.com" part but I want to hear what the blogging experts think. If none of these can you give some "must do's" when blog writing?

kane · 03-17-2012, 01:22 PM

I like #2 the best then #3 and #1 the least. #1 sounds like a sales pitch for a site. #3 has some of that in it, but is still more erotic and #2, to me, is the most erotic of them all. #2 was the only one I found myself actually wanting to continue reading after the first few sentences.

Just my 2 cents.

PornHustler · 03-17-2012, 03:28 PM

Thanks, any other opinions?

davethedope · 03-17-2012, 03:58 PM

All three suck. They're hacky. Try to be honest. I'd try something like:

I wonder why the media tries so hard to create the impression that interracial relationships
between blacks and whites are primarily about white women seeking big black cocks. It's
funny, black girls get lost in the mix. This video is a great example of the reverse in effect: a black girl who wants a big white cock. Let's face it, pussy is pussy, and it
would be pretty gay to turn down black pussy. I think most...

and so on and so forth. Write something worth reading, if you can, and not
just brainless stuff like wow, look at this black pussy, etc. etc.

Porn isn't suited for blogging though. There's nothing to say about it, unless you're
really smart. You're better off writing about a totally unrelated subject that interests
you and mentioning the porn in passing.

PornHustler · 03-18-2012, 03:36 PM

any other opinions?

Tommydiv · 03-18-2012, 03:46 PM

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Originally Posted by kane

I like #2 the best then #3 and #1 the least. #1 sounds like a sales pitch for a site. #3 has some of that in it, but is still more erotic and #2, to me, is the most erotic of them all. #2 was the only one I found myself actually wanting to continue reading after the first few sentences.

Just my 2 cents.

I cant read your posts, your sig is too hot
remove it!

kane · 03-18-2012, 04:17 PM

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Originally Posted by Tommydiv

I cant read your posts, your sig is too hot
remove it!

lol. I sometimes just find myself staring at it.

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kane Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: portland, OR Posts: 20,684	I like #2 the best then #3 and #1 the least. #1 sounds like a sales pitch for a site. #3 has some of that in it, but is still more erotic and #2, to me, is the most erotic of them all. #2 was the only one I found myself actually wanting to continue reading after the first few sentences. Just my 2 cents.

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03-17-2012, 03:58 PM	#4
davethedope Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 532	All three suck. They're hacky. Try to be honest. I'd try something like: I wonder why the media tries so hard to create the impression that interracial relationships between blacks and whites are primarily about white women seeking big black cocks. It's funny, black girls get lost in the mix. This video is a great example of the reverse in effect: a black girl who wants a big white cock. Let's face it, pussy is pussy, and it would be pretty gay to turn down black pussy. I think most... and so on and so forth. Write something worth reading, if you can, and not just brainless stuff like wow, look at this black pussy, etc. etc. Porn isn't suited for blogging though. There's nothing to say about it, unless you're really smart. You're better off writing about a totally unrelated subject that interests you and mentioning the porn in passing.