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Compdoctor · 04-30-2007, 11:02 PM

the logo I created?

soulbleed · 04-30-2007, 11:14 PM

i think so. the character is cool, but i dont really like the font or they way the text is laid out

Voodoo · 04-30-2007, 11:16 PM

Use just the head, and simple text next to it. You can use him elsewhere for further descriptors of whatever the site is about, like him holding his hand out to display an ad or text block, etc... But you want to keep your main logo simple and easy to read. It's great otherwise.

Holly · 04-30-2007, 11:30 PM

The whole thing is a mess. Too big, font is fucked up, layers are crazy. And apparently he's mastered the art of levitation.

That's not a logo. It's an hpa. That no one can read.

Steve Awesome · 04-30-2007, 11:40 PM

The words are far too obscured. Arrangement is everything. Here is a very rough re-arrangement to where it's at least usable enough to read.

CashGordon · 05-01-2007, 04:37 AM

It is cool but hard to read, you must put more spacing between characters

bobby666 · 05-01-2007, 04:40 AM

the font hurts my eyes but the toon is great

TeenCat · 05-01-2007, 04:42 AM

hey man how long are you doing design? logo can be big or small, depends on how you scale it lol

Sarah_Jayne · 05-01-2007, 05:06 AM

It feels to cluttered for me.

u-Bob · 05-01-2007, 06:24 AM

too hard to read imho.

Cyndalie · 05-01-2007, 06:30 AM

I agree, hard to read, too large/bulky

zeruel · 05-01-2007, 06:31 AM

that was nice... cool colors... if its a logo, it was too big... :D

g$$$ · 05-01-2007, 06:31 AM

hard to read....steve awesome has the right idea....

nikooo · 05-01-2007, 09:51 AM

just the make the words more readable...by experimenting with some more fonts..

04-30-2007, 11:02 PM	#1
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04-30-2007, 11:14 PM	#2
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04-30-2007, 11:16 PM	#3
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04-30-2007, 11:30 PM	#4
Holly Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Jun 2003 Location: Jesusland Posts: 10,017	The whole thing is a mess. Too big, font is fucked up, layers are crazy. And apparently he's mastered the art of levitation. That's not a logo. It's an hpa. That no one can read. __________________ War National Damn Champions Eagle

04-30-2007, 11:40 PM	#5
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05-01-2007, 04:37 AM	#6
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05-01-2007, 05:06 AM	#9
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05-01-2007, 06:24 AM	#10
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05-01-2007, 06:30 AM	#11
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05-01-2007, 06:31 AM	#12
zeruel Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: I was born intelligent, but Google ruined me! Posts: 1,387	that was nice... cool colors... if its a logo, it was too big... :D

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g$$$ Confirmed User Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 2,807	hard to read....steve awesome has the right idea....

05-01-2007, 09:51 AM	#14
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