Hey friends I think I have finished my sites and webmasters area!

[Va2k]

Hey guys I want some opioions from you peep's http://www.va2k.net is finaly finished BTW IF anyone would like to make a trade to help me get better writting and grammer for my site hit me up. On the first two pages if you refresh them the top left pic will change each time the page is loaded.

I have put everything together in the webmasters area http://www.va2k.net/webmaster/
I have ccbill globill paypal as my 3 cc.p also I have a phone and a dialer that webmastrers can promote as well for people outside the usa.

I have finished http://www.givenhead.com and havent pushed one single peice of traffic to it. Had 3 signups via paypal from that site from an exit popup. Im still around 1:180-184 yesterday was 1:250 So I know I need to make the text more appealing and better grammer then what I now have upthere. Like I said if no above would love to work out a trade with someone to help with the re-writting of grammer. If not if anyone can post here some correct ways to put what I have allready up there that will help as well.


Thank you

TOM
Back to work on galleries and freesites lol


PEACE

[sherbert]

Cool.


Small tip:

First page of "Given Head" should have a chick with cum blasted over her face... "given" gives the impression that it has already happened. If it was "giving" or "give", that is when a chick sucking a dick would be suitable.

[Amputate Your Head]

wow Tom! Those sites have come a LONG way since the first time I saw them.... nice job man.....

[funkmaster]

... when I clicked JOIN NOW at your third tour page (http://www.givenhead.com/tour3.htm) it took me to http://www.givenhead.com/join.htm (404 not found) ... all other join links seem to work ... hope this helps

[Va2k]

Well holy bat hell I didnt know given meant in pass tence FARK thanks for the heads up on that ( no puns intended ) Amp you have made my week screw that my YEAR when someone with your talent even bothers to look at someones work like myselfs and then give a great comment only means you are a great person. Thanks mate.

And everyone else Thank you.. Oh im going to be adding this sunday daily updates and weekley updates. So now when I promote it I wont be saing weekley but instead Daily got a great script from a GREAT PERSON btw thanks you know who you are. *scared to say name dont know if he would like that* I would like to say thank you to LocalG from Localgspot aka buster if it wasnt for him sitting down hour after hour trying to sink it through my head on what I should be doing and not doing I would not have gotten this far and TO jfpdude my network admin and best friend and great all around guy * Ok ill stop sucking up* Thanks again


I tell ya running a pay site is NOT for the weak hearted lol it had taken me almost two years to get enough content and shit to keep my members recurring. I do have a few members that have been members since april of 2000 freaking kool... Thanks again and again so NOW PLEASE HELP WITH MY DAMN GRAMMER LOL I swear im trying to learn how to speak and write better grammer.


TOM

[Va2k]

Originally posted by funkmaster
... when I clicked JOIN NOW at your third tour page (http://www.givenhead.com/tour3.htm) it took me to http://www.givenhead.com/join.htm (404 not found) ... all other join links seem to work ... hope this helps

Funk Its fixed thanks for pointing it out to me mate!

TOM