SEO guys, need some eyeballs to review something I'm working on - GoFuckYourself.com

tical · 07-05-2008, 07:30 PM

Anyone here with some good SEO skills care to give me a hand with a quick review of something I'm working on?

I just want to make sure my structure looks solid before I keep going with it. Any other pointers would be helpful too.

If you feel the need for some cash, I can shell out a few bucks as well for some good advice. Paypal only.

I *think* I'm doing things correctly... I just want another pair of experienced eyeballs on it.

I'm new to the SEO game & I know there is a lot of information out there but I'd prefer to just hit the ground running with this site

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WiredGuy · 07-05-2008, 07:33 PM

Post the url?
WG

Deej · 07-05-2008, 07:55 PM

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Originally Posted by WiredGuy

Post the url?
WG

what he said...

tical · 07-05-2008, 08:02 PM

i kinda wanted to keep it private, i can hit you guys up w/ it?

yahoo-xxx-girls.com · 07-05-2008, 08:13 PM

ill do it as a freebee

Marky333 · 07-05-2008, 10:46 PM

I need some SEO advices too ... 248265709 if you can toss in a few ideas about SEO. Thanks

Iron Fist · 07-05-2008, 11:43 PM

I need some advise too on how to get 5K a month for doing next to nothing.... hit me up people

Fucksakes · 07-05-2008, 11:47 PM

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Originally Posted by sharphead

I need some advise too on how to get 5K a month for doing next to nothing.... hit me up people

work hard for 8 years.. and than do nothing

tical · 07-06-2008, 01:06 AM

thanks for all of the help guys, i think im on the right track now

tical · 07-06-2008, 02:15 AM

question about spammy density....

i have 4 terms for this page... all start with "Las Vegas ________"

i've got the density for my selected keywords between 3 - 6% however because the keywords ALL start with "Las Vegas" the density for "Las Vegas" is now 11%....

isn't that spammy? "Las Vegas" alone isn't a keyword i'm going for... but i'm concerned if the density of it will effect the true keywords i'm optimizing for.

anyone know?

beta-tester · 07-06-2008, 03:39 AM

focus on real content, don't care about 'density' and other stuff, as long as it is natural and compelling.

xentech · 07-06-2008, 04:21 AM

Density matters alot less then you would think. Just write naturally but include your keywords.

yahoo-xxx-girls.com · 07-06-2008, 04:33 AM

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Originally Posted by xentech

Density matters alot less then you would think. Just write naturally but include your keywords.

Wow... you know your sooooooo right....

I give you a BIG...

V_RocKs · 07-06-2008, 06:41 AM

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Originally Posted by Balalsubturfyooj

Wow... you know your sooooooo right....

I give you a BIG...

Actually he is right... and you probably just over think yourself into more work.

Sorry you...

Kard63 · 07-06-2008, 09:49 AM

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Originally Posted by WiredGuy

Post the url?
WG

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baddog · 07-06-2008, 10:30 AM

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Originally Posted by beta-tester

focus on real content, don't care about 'density' and other stuff, as long as it is natural and compelling.

Don't worry about density?

yahoo-xxx-girls.com · 07-06-2008, 11:11 AM

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Originally Posted by V_RocKs

Actually he is right... and you probably just over think yourself into more work.

Sorry you...

Well actually you're wrong... sry...

beta-tester · 07-06-2008, 03:04 PM

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Originally Posted by baddog

Don't worry about density?

exactly. As long as you provide compelling content on subject you try to optimize for you're good and you'll be good.

tical · 07-06-2008, 06:05 PM

ok fuck it, critique this for me http://dev.findlasvegasrealestate.com

before i put anything live (robots.txt is denying everything right now) i need to figure out whether i should have the pages keyword rich like this OR if this is too excessive...

i made my title tag sound more like a real sentence rather than: "Las Vegas Real Estate - Las Vegas Homes - Las Vegas MLS - Las Vegas Real Estate Agent"

but then i lose the exact matches in the body copy / h1's...

this is the only part that is confusing me

(btw the images at the bottom & large jpg at the top are just placeholders)

tical · 07-06-2008, 06:06 PM

btw the keywords im going for on this page are las vegas real estate, las vegas homes, las vegas mls, las vegas real estate agents

tical · 07-06-2008, 06:08 PM

also thanks to everyone that took the time to give me some pointers... its just hard as hell not to over analyze this shit since its my first go at this

oh yea the www. goes to some guys other site that i bought the domain from... that isn't mine, just redirecting for now

beta-tester · 07-07-2008, 08:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tical

ok fuck it, critique this for me http://dev.findlasvegasrealestate.com

before i put anything live (robots.txt is denying everything right now) i need to figure out whether i should have the pages keyword rich like this OR if this is too excessive...

i made my title tag sound more like a real sentence rather than: "Las Vegas Real Estate - Las Vegas Homes - Las Vegas MLS - Las Vegas Real Estate Agent"

but then i lose the exact matches in the body copy / h1's...

this is the only part that is confusing me

(btw the images at the bottom & large jpg at the top are just placeholders)

I think that you're good to go with current amount of keywords and content you have there. Title is well written and good, content area too, what I would like to do is cut down meta desc a little bit. And make it 'catchy' in surfers' eyes.

Everything else is ready to rank well ;)

DamianJ · 07-07-2008, 08:59 AM

Any SEO advice you get for free is not worth having. They guys that know about SEO wouldn't help you for nothing. The ones that would, well you may as well just get advice from a box of cornflakes.

beta-tester · 07-07-2008, 10:07 AM

bullshit Damian. Even though it's a biz, it doesn't cost you a shit to throw an advice here and there.....

bignick · 07-07-2008, 10:20 AM

I have a huge list of stuff you can fix on the site. I might want to start offering seo work for people, so I'm doing a few free analysis' for people now.

ICQ me for details 466 258 895

Nick

Jdoughs · 07-07-2008, 10:22 AM

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Originally Posted by bignick

I have a huge list of stuff you can fix on the site. I might want to start offering seo work for people, so I'm doing a few free analysis' for people now.

ICQ me for details 466 258 895

Nick

Should mozey on over to the "show your serps" thread and post some results, show people what kind of great things you will be charging for.

Jdoughs · 07-07-2008, 10:23 AM

And for the record.

Keyword Density is a "penalty factor", not a ranking factor.

Have too much and its not getting listed cause its spam. You want to use your words naturally, if that means you have to write the term 15 times on the site, then you do. Just write the text natural and let the keyword fall into the descriptions like its meant to be there, should not look like it was added to increase "density"

Never, ever have I thought of "density".

Agent 488 · 07-07-2008, 10:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by tical

i made my title tag sound more like a real sentence rather than: "Las Vegas Real Estate - Las Vegas Homes - Las Vegas MLS - Las Vegas Real Estate Agent"

but then i lose the exact matches in the body copy / h1's...

this is the only part that is confusing me

look at the title tag on the site ranking for "Las Vegas Real Estate" now.

polle54 · 07-07-2008, 10:36 AM

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Originally Posted by beta-tester

I think that you're good to go with current amount of keywords and content you have there. Title is well written and good, content area too, what I would like to do is cut down meta desc a little bit. And make it 'catchy' in surfers' eyes.

Everything else is ready to rank well ;)

I agree now you just need the single most important thing

Links

Remember to vary your sentences and only get links from sites with page and pagerank in relevance to your site.

Make the link building over a long period and show steady growth so it looks as organic as possible.

Mr Pheer · 07-07-2008, 10:38 AM

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Originally Posted by DamianJ

Any SEO advice you get for free is not worth having. They guys that know about SEO wouldn't help you for nothing. The ones that would, well you may as well just get advice from a box of cornflakes.

I love cornflakes

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tical Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 6,504	question about spammy density.... i have 4 terms for this page... all start with "Las Vegas ________" i've got the density for my selected keywords between 3 - 6% however because the keywords ALL start with "Las Vegas" the density for "Las Vegas" is now 11%.... isn't that spammy? "Las Vegas" alone isn't a keyword i'm going for... but i'm concerned if the density of it will effect the true keywords i'm optimizing for. anyone know? __________________ 112.020.756

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xentech Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: England Posts: 1,405	Density matters alot less then you would think. Just write naturally but include your keywords.

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tical Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 6,504	ok fuck it, critique this for me http://dev.findlasvegasrealestate.com before i put anything live (robots.txt is denying everything right now) i need to figure out whether i should have the pages keyword rich like this OR if this is too excessive... i made my title tag sound more like a real sentence rather than: "Las Vegas Real Estate - Las Vegas Homes - Las Vegas MLS - Las Vegas Real Estate Agent" but then i lose the exact matches in the body copy / h1's... this is the only part that is confusing me (btw the images at the bottom & large jpg at the top are just placeholders) __________________ 112.020.756

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tical Confirmed User Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Las Vegas Posts: 6,504	also thanks to everyone that took the time to give me some pointers... its just hard as hell not to over analyze this shit since its my first go at this oh yea the www. goes to some guys other site that i bought the domain from... that isn't mine, just redirecting for now __________________ 112.020.756 Last edited by tical; 07-06-2008 at 06:09 PM..

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Jdoughs Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Great White North Posts: 5,794	And for the record. Keyword Density is a "penalty factor", not a ranking factor. Have too much and its not getting listed cause its spam. You want to use your words naturally, if that means you have to write the term 15 times on the site, then you do. Just write the text natural and let the keyword fall into the descriptions like its meant to be there, should not look like it was added to increase "density" Never, ever have I thought of "density". __________________ LinkSpun - Premier Adult Link Trading Community - ICQ - 464/\281/\250 Be Seen By New Webmasters/Affiliates * Target out webmasters/affiliates based on niches your sites are for less than $20 a month. AmeriNOC - Proudly hosted @ AmeriNOC! Last edited by Jdoughs; 07-07-2008 at 10:26 AM..