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Old 01-12-2009, 11:03 AM   #1
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New Site Design.... BrookLittle.com

Would love some feedback to what you think about our first draft for our new site BrookLittle.com

http://brookelittle.com/brooklittle_draft.jpg

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Old 01-12-2009, 11:04 AM   #2
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Would love some feedback to what you think about our first draft for our new site BrookLittle.com

Brook Little First Draft

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Old 01-12-2009, 11:05 AM   #3
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same error here
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Old 01-12-2009, 11:06 AM   #4
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Yeah dude, get that shit off of lock down so we can have a look
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Old 01-12-2009, 11:06 AM   #5
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Hmmm...

Thats weird it opened for me but not on here

http://brookelittle.com/brooklittle_draft.jpg

Think if you cut and paste the url in to an explorer it will work...
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Old 01-12-2009, 11:07 AM   #6
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Put a www. infront.
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Old 01-12-2009, 11:08 AM   #7
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Old 01-12-2009, 11:12 AM   #8
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http://www.brookelittle.com/brooklittle_draft.jpg

Looks very nice too
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Old 01-12-2009, 11:12 AM   #9
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Yay

This one should work...

Brook Little First Draft Take 2
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Old 01-12-2009, 11:16 AM   #10
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lol that dont work now either (not when directly clicked on anyway!)

Best to just copy and paste the link (or see the post above)
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Old 01-12-2009, 11:20 AM   #11
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Looks pretty good. I think you could probably make the photos "pop" a bit more
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Old 01-12-2009, 11:25 AM   #12
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Looks pretty good. I think you could probably make the photos "pop" a bit more
My feeling is the design is a little flat... is that what you mean by "pop" a bit more...
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Old 01-12-2009, 11:32 AM   #13
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Old 01-12-2009, 11:34 AM   #14
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add some depth to the model extractions for one... change the yellowness of the site... other than that i like it ;)
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Old 01-12-2009, 11:42 AM   #15
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Old 01-12-2009, 11:43 AM   #16
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This one should work...

Brook Little First Draft Take 2
Yeah that link worked. Nice tour.
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Old 01-12-2009, 11:43 AM   #17
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read the whole thread, man. For once, maybe?
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Old 01-12-2009, 11:53 AM   #18
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add some depth to the model extractions for one... change the yellowness of the site... other than that i like it ;)
Well I want the yellow changed, but maybe to something a little stronger... as in a better yellow lol... we wanted to make the site design real girlie... and have different colours from the usual pinks, reds, blacks... so a more pastal colour scheme even if a little more vibrant was what we was shooting for...

OK I know pastal and vibrant dont really go... damn I wish it was easier to explain what we want, my poor designer We're also going to change some of the pics... there are a few more that show off her boobs better lol ! Along with some text and gramma changes...

I will post version 2 once the changes are done... any more suggestions ?
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Old 01-12-2009, 07:25 PM   #19
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Yay

Glad your all liking the boobies
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Well I want the yellow changed, but maybe to something a little stronger... as in a better yellow lol... we wanted to make the site design real girlie... and have different colours from the usual pinks, reds, blacks... so a more pastal colour scheme even if a little more vibrant was what we was shooting for...

OK I know pastal and vibrant dont really go... damn I wish it was easier to explain what we want, my poor designer We're also going to change some of the pics... there are a few more that show off her boobs better lol ! Along with some text and gramma changes...

I will post version 2 once the changes are done... any more suggestions ?
Pastels are good for teenish sites... vibrance is fun... you can pull them both off with some nice swoops n swirls... the design as is is on the right road... its the dull yellow (which i think you also feel) and the rainbow title bars are to me, annoying... that might be it...

plus im fond of model depth - shadows and shit... maybe just blurs...

just makes the girls pop a little instead of keeping the 2D look...


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The pastels are also killing me a little... if they were a bit bolder and less washed out. The photography is also adjusted on the high-key side so it looks as if I'm dropping acid and everything is way too intense. Otherwise, functionally, you're pretty much on par with what's out there.
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