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snaker · 02-08-2009, 06:54 PM

Just about ready to finalize our new handjob site http://www.clubtug.com/tour1.htm What you all think so far Im open to crituques...

SIK · 02-08-2009, 07:04 PM

Animated gifs in 2009.?

Sucks all together btw, unless you're aiming for that "amateur look will bring sales" thing

Xxaru Media · 02-08-2009, 08:47 PM

Yeah, get rid of the gifs and get some trailers.

Young · 02-08-2009, 08:54 PM

i like the simplicity. not familiar with the niche and not a big fan so i can't really critique your choice of thumbs. kill the animated gif's though and replace it with some flash video.

TeenCat · 02-08-2009, 08:55 PM

what they said ... and maybe some decent background ... looks to empty too me ... but wish you luck with it!

NaughtyRob · 02-08-2009, 10:34 PM

Looks very "girlfriend" site style. And amateur. I like it.

mmcfadden · 02-08-2009, 11:11 PM

i think it would work... the massive jizz at the end i would keep as a gif... the others maybe change to a trailor

devine · 02-08-2009, 11:15 PM

I'd use flv instead of gifs and maybe add a bg to the nav and some kind of limit to the main table, either a border or a diff bg color. Anyway, it looks really simple and good, well done

snaker · 02-09-2009, 01:16 AM

thanks all!

Ozarkz · 02-09-2009, 01:39 AM

All it is right now is a layout.. Which is good because it's standard.. At a couple of flashy borders and backgrounds and you are good to go :P

nolongerexists · 02-09-2009, 03:17 AM

it's content that counts not some bling bling tour you see on 3/4 of paysites.. :-)
I like its simplicity - and content rocks

and i feel these gifs are the key to keep.. you can switch to flv but i bet they bring sales :-)

StaceyJo · 02-09-2009, 04:32 AM

Looking good.

tranza · 02-09-2009, 06:10 AM

It looks ok for amateur niche...

DamageX · 02-09-2009, 06:15 AM

KISS is good.

This thumb is scary though:

Xxaru Media · 02-09-2009, 10:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by blindzior

it's content that counts not some bling bling tour you see on 3/4 of paysites.. :-)
I like its simplicity - and content rocks

And exactly how can you tell if the content is any good from looking at a 3 second gif??

gleem · 02-09-2009, 10:29 AM

I like the look of the tour nice and amateur up my alley, just a bit on the white side though... put some color in your template.

alexchechs · 02-09-2009, 10:33 AM

Definitly needs some video clips and some rollover action on links. Plus I think in general it needs a "container" not just having everything float around in white space. It doesnt let your eye focus unless the content is contained well...

M0nk · 02-09-2009, 11:43 AM

kill those animated gifs for the love of god! we are in 2009!
maybe some nice trailers or something.....

MrDeiz · 02-09-2009, 11:45 AM

i like how your tour looks

anyway content is a king in your case

WhiplashDug · 02-09-2009, 11:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TeenCat

what they said ... and maybe some decent background ... looks to empty too me ... but wish you luck with it!

Too much negative space.

TDF · 02-09-2009, 11:47 AM

why show the cumshot? isnt that the whole point of enticing the surfer to sign up

Reak AGV · 02-09-2009, 11:48 AM

It's pretty white and the menu isn't all that easy to read

Bro Media - BANNED FOR LIFE · 02-09-2009, 11:56 AM

Why's everyone saying replace the GIF with a FLV? do you understand the FLV will show exactly what the GIF does? It's all just a format.

Twistys Tim · 02-09-2009, 12:16 PM

Took ages to load with all the gifs.

Also, I hit the join now button, which took me to a join page, where I had to choose my billing option, which then took me to the CCBill page that asked me for my billing option, which then took me to the join form.

Too many stages and clicks. If your surfer hits the join button, let them join!

John-ACWM · 02-09-2009, 01:44 PM

Great for a porn site

Ozarkz · 02-09-2009, 01:51 PM

Starting like this is the best way to learn to design/build tours.

Work on the content layout and then add the bling later..

snaker · 02-09-2009, 02:19 PM

Thanks all! Much appreciated...made some changes to the background and you right it look much better. We wanna keep it real amateur to go inline with the content.

Elli · 02-09-2009, 03:22 PM

I actually really like the gifs. It gives you an idea of the ending without having to watch a 15 second trailer with sound that might be heard by others in the um.. office.

The colours are a bit too teeny bopper for the genre, imo.

02-08-2009, 06:54 PM	#1
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02-08-2009, 07:04 PM	#2
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02-08-2009, 08:54 PM	#4
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02-08-2009, 08:47 PM	#3
Xxaru Media Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: MIA Posts: 255	Yeah, get rid of the gifs and get some trailers.

02-08-2009, 11:11 PM	#7
mmcfadden So Fucking Banned Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: philly Posts: 5,099	i think it would work... the massive jizz at the end i would keep as a gif... the others maybe change to a trailor

02-08-2009, 11:15 PM	#8
devine Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 620	I'd use flv instead of gifs and maybe add a bg to the nav and some kind of limit to the main table, either a border or a diff bg color. Anyway, it looks really simple and good, well done

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02-09-2009, 01:39 AM	#10
Ozarkz So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 2,377	All it is right now is a layout.. Which is good because it's standard.. At a couple of flashy borders and backgrounds and you are good to go :P

02-09-2009, 03:17 AM	#11
nolongerexists Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 1,096	it's content that counts not some bling bling tour you see on 3/4 of paysites.. :-) I like its simplicity - and content rocks and i feel these gifs are the key to keep.. you can switch to flv but i bet they bring sales :-) __________________ work smart not hard ;) Last edited by nolongerexists; 02-09-2009 at 03:18 AM..

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02-09-2009, 10:29 AM	#16
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02-09-2009, 10:33 AM	#17
alexchechs Confirmed User Join Date: May 2008 Location: BROOKLYN!!! Posts: 3,474	Definitly needs some video clips and some rollover action on links. Plus I think in general it needs a "container" not just having everything float around in white space. It doesnt let your eye focus unless the content is contained well... __________________ Alex Chechs http://thefawnconspiracy.com

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02-09-2009, 12:16 PM	#24
Twistys Tim Confirmed User Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: Twistys HQ Posts: 1,923	Took ages to load with all the gifs. Also, I hit the join now button, which took me to a join page, where I had to choose my billing option, which then took me to the CCBill page that asked me for my billing option, which then took me to the join form. Too many stages and clicks. If your surfer hits the join button, let them join! __________________ $100 PPS Xmas Promo [email protected] ICQ 311545482 Skype timmy_vee

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02-09-2009, 01:51 PM	#26
Ozarkz So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jan 2009 Posts: 2,377	Starting like this is the best way to learn to design/build tours. Work on the content layout and then add the bling later..

02-09-2009, 02:19 PM	#27
snaker Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 1,281	Thanks all! Much appreciated...made some changes to the background and you right it look much better. We wanna keep it real amateur to go inline with the content. __________________ My Best Sponsors: Naughty Revenue \| Get Score Cash \| Thick Cash

02-09-2009, 03:22 PM	#28
Elli Reach for those stars! Industry Role: Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Vancouver, BC Posts: 17,991	I actually really like the gifs. It gives you an idea of the ending without having to watch a 15 second trailer with sound that might be heard by others in the um.. office. The colours are a bit too teeny bopper for the genre, imo. __________________ Make More Money with Cams and Dating at FFN.com! email: [email protected]