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vegasbobby · 02-02-2010, 09:50 PM

Hey webmasters,

love to get some feedback on my site SweetEmber.com.
Anything you guy may think would get a surfer to join the site.

Thanks : )

$5 submissions · 02-04-2010, 09:04 PM

Bump for a biz related thread

Jack OAT · 02-04-2010, 09:32 PM

Definitely coded by an amateur. Probably a theme injected with your content though, so it doesn't look too terrible... but the header and the preview/join graphics need work, and it needs a lot of help with the general layout. Everything above the episodes needs to be re-organized and then the episode area needs to be done better. All the spacing and white space is out of whack.

You'll hear a lot of people preach about an amateur site looking amateur, but your surfers still need to get the info. they are looking for without it being a hunting expedition. If a surfer sees this tour and doesn't instantly fall in love with your girl, they'll never scroll down and see what's up. Some people need convincing.

02-02-2010, 09:50 PM	#1
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02-04-2010, 09:04 PM	#2
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02-04-2010, 09:32 PM	#3
Jack OAT Confirmed User Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 176	Definitely coded by an amateur. Probably a theme injected with your content though, so it doesn't look too terrible... but the header and the preview/join graphics need work, and it needs a lot of help with the general layout. Everything above the episodes needs to be re-organized and then the episode area needs to be done better. All the spacing and white space is out of whack. You'll hear a lot of people preach about an amateur site looking amateur, but your surfers still need to get the info. they are looking for without it being a hunting expedition. If a surfer sees this tour and doesn't instantly fall in love with your girl, they'll never scroll down and see what's up. Some people need convincing. __________________ my icq...... 615294405..... .....jackoatwebmaster@gmail I am a webmaster toolbox.. I can do it all.. I am Jack OAT mobile sites + xhtml/css + design + wordpress + script install/integration