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Jakke PNG · 12-27-2002, 06:48 PM

Well, actually sofar, just rate my cartoon char that will be a part of a logo for a free gay site.
Whaddya think? It's my first try at a male manga pic.
I know the coloring is a bit odd at parts... gimme a honest opinion.

I'm off to bed, I wanna see atleast 1 reply when I come back in 6 hours or so.

Loch · 12-27-2002, 06:49 PM

For your first i think its good

Libertine · 12-27-2002, 06:50 PM

Looks good, dude, very good even.

Fletch XXX · 12-27-2002, 06:50 PM

Nice.

Cohen · 12-27-2002, 06:52 PM

very nice

what program do you use fro drawing?

Daymare · 12-27-2002, 06:53 PM

Looks like a good start

Jakke PNG · 12-27-2002, 06:53 PM

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Originally posted by Cohen
very nice what program do you use fro drawing?

A pen, a scanner and photoshop.
Thanks for the sweet replies everyone.

TDF · 12-27-2002, 06:54 PM

am i the only idiot not seeing the drawing?

Loch · 12-27-2002, 06:55 PM

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Originally posted by toodamnfli
am i the only idiot not seeing the drawing?

YES

-=HUNGRYMAN=- · 12-27-2002, 06:55 PM

Hey TGF ... that Rocks !!!

I can draw the FUKENGRUVEN stick man quite well ... but that is the extent of my personal toon talents ... that is why I have 2 very talented artists on staff ...

Now if constructive criticism is what you are after, I would say overall it is a very good attempt ... the body is proportionate, which is where so many people fuck up ... All I would fix is make the hands a little more believeable, and maybe give him a slight nose job ...

Jakke PNG · 12-27-2002, 06:57 PM

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Originally posted by -=HUNGRYMAN=-
All I would fix is make the hands a little more believeable, and maybe give him a slight nose job ...

You have NO idea how many erasers I wasted on those hands so far, I do agree they suck ass. A nose job may be implemented too before I make it an actual logo

Gutterboy · 12-27-2002, 06:59 PM

I think its very good overall.

The upper body is a bit amorphous & doughy tho, give that boy some muscle definition!

Jakke PNG · 12-27-2002, 07:01 PM

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Originally posted by Gutterboy
I think its very good overall.

The upper body is a bit amorphous & doughy tho, give that boy some muscle definition!

What can I say... he's a twink

archer · 12-27-2002, 07:08 PM

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Originally posted by Gutterboy
I think its very good overall.

The upper body is a bit amorphous & doughy tho, give that boy some muscle definition!

exactly what i would say gutterboy

and teengodfather.... twinks don't mean no muscle... trust me, i know

Jak · 12-27-2002, 07:12 PM

Am I the only one getting a red X?

Jak

Mutt · 12-27-2002, 07:19 PM

hehehehe............. not bad TeenGodfather

BUT please look at your figure's left hand, notice anything odd?

-=HUNGRYMAN=- · 12-27-2002, 07:22 PM

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Originally posted by TeenGodFather

You have NO idea how many erasers I wasted on those hands so far, I do agree they suck ass. A nose job may be implemented too before I make it an actual logo

That's why I stick to STICK MEN brother !!!

I've been trying to get a job as the design guy at VOLKSWAGEN for years now !!!!

Mutt · 12-27-2002, 07:24 PM

i wanted to be a cartoonist when i was in college, i submitted to every fucking men's magazine, Playboy, Penthouse, Hustler......never got anything accepted, i may have been too demented even for Larry Flynt. I got some trade magazines to buy some but they pay like 40 dollars, some even less so i gave that up.

BUT the cartoonists greatest tool is a mirror, you should have a mirror when u draw, for facial expressions, hand gestures, etc

Mutt · 12-27-2002, 07:27 PM

i know man, hands always drove me nuts that's why i was looking at yours. The left hand - the thumb is on the wrong side! he's a mutant!

take a figure drawing class, or just buy a good figure drawing book, there are lots of them.

Mutt · 12-27-2002, 07:28 PM

the left hand of the manga twink i mean HIS left hand, to the right for the viewer.

p1mpdogg · 12-27-2002, 07:34 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by TeenGodFather
Well, actually sofar, just rate my cartoon char that will be a part of a logo for a free gay site.
Whaddya think? It's my first try at a male manga pic.
I know the coloring is a bit odd at parts... gimme a honest opinion.

I'm off to bed, I wanna see atleast 1 reply when I come back in 6 hours or so.

Since when do humans have thier thumb on the left hand on the outside?!?!?!

Triple 6 · 12-27-2002, 08:45 PM

Hands are one of the hardest things to draw. Look at todays video and pc games - great work with characters, but most of them have some fugly hands.

.:Frog:. · 12-27-2002, 08:49 PM

Looks good. Just fix his left hand.

Jakke PNG · 12-28-2002, 02:25 AM

Ahahaha..

Holy shit. That's funny.
How didn't I notice something like that myself?! Well...

-=HUNGRYMAN=- · 12-28-2002, 02:28 AM

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Originally posted by p1mpdogg

Since when do humans have thier thumb on the left hand on the outside?!?!?!

No no no !!! It is very obvious what happened here ...

The poor guy used his left hand to apply some penis growth cream, and now his fingers are all big and fat ... that is actually his pinky finger !!

wouncie · 12-28-2002, 02:45 AM

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Originally posted by p1mpdogg

Since when do humans have thier thumb on the left hand on the outside?!?!?!

DrewKole · 12-28-2002, 03:38 AM

Its coo I likes it

SetTheWorldonFire · 12-28-2002, 03:55 AM

pretty good!

what's he supposed to be holding?

-=HUNGRYMAN=- · 12-28-2002, 04:11 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by SetTheWorldonFire
pretty good!

what's he supposed to be holding?

A tube of PENIS GROWTH CREAM

moresexmovies · 12-28-2002, 04:29 AM

Looks good man,..

12-27-2002, 06:48 PM	#1
Jakke PNG ex-TeenGodFather Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2001 Location: Suomi Finland Perkele Posts: 20,306	Rate a logo Well, actually sofar, just rate my cartoon char that will be a part of a logo for a free gay site. Whaddya think? It's my first try at a male manga pic. I know the coloring is a bit odd at parts... gimme a honest opinion. I'm off to bed, I wanna see atleast 1 reply when I come back in 6 hours or so. __________________ ..and I'm off.

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-=HUNGRYMAN=- Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: Between your mamma's legs Posts: 4,753	Hey TGF ... that Rocks !!! I can draw the FUKENGRUVEN stick man quite well ... but that is the extent of my personal toon talents ... that is why I have 2 very talented artists on staff ... Now if constructive criticism is what you are after, I would say overall it is a very good attempt ... the body is proportionate, which is where so many people fuck up ... All I would fix is make the hands a little more believeable, and maybe give him a slight nose job ... __________________

12-27-2002, 06:59 PM	#12
Gutterboy So Fucking Banned Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Dis Posts: 4,751	I think its very good overall. The upper body is a bit amorphous & doughy tho, give that boy some muscle definition!

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12-27-2002, 07:19 PM	#16
Mutt Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 34,431	hehehehe............. not bad TeenGodfather BUT please look at your figure's left hand, notice anything odd? __________________ I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!

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Mutt Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 34,431	i wanted to be a cartoonist when i was in college, i submitted to every fucking men's magazine, Playboy, Penthouse, Hustler......never got anything accepted, i may have been too demented even for Larry Flynt. I got some trade magazines to buy some but they pay like 40 dollars, some even less so i gave that up. BUT the cartoonists greatest tool is a mirror, you should have a mirror when u draw, for facial expressions, hand gestures, etc __________________ I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!

12-27-2002, 07:27 PM	#19
Mutt Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 34,431	i know man, hands always drove me nuts that's why i was looking at yours. The left hand - the thumb is on the wrong side! he's a mutant! take a figure drawing class, or just buy a good figure drawing book, there are lots of them. __________________ I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!

12-27-2002, 07:28 PM	#20
Mutt Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Posts: 34,431	the left hand of the manga twink i mean HIS left hand, to the right for the viewer. __________________ I moved my sites to Vacares Hosting. I've saved money, my hair is thicker, lost some weight too! Thanks Sly!

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12-28-2002, 02:25 AM	#24
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