Wethoney Attempt # 2 - GoFuckYourself.com

wethoney · 01-12-2003, 08:56 PM

Ok after many hours of work and nearly going blind working in Photoshop and I've come up with another tour since everyone thought my last attempt sucked ass.

http://www.wethoney.com

Tell me what you think.

Spunky · 01-12-2003, 08:58 PM

looks good..

EscortBiz · 01-12-2003, 09:01 PM

way better

Lethal · 01-12-2003, 09:02 PM

Much improved.

Still feels like you need more of a realistic storyline, add more character/introduce your fictional persona and talk to the surfer rather than just describing the scenarios. Make the thumbs bigger and brighter.

slapass · 01-12-2003, 09:08 PM

I like it! would the pics also lead to the join page? Not an expert just curious if those buttons would be it or not.

wethoney · 01-12-2003, 09:14 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Lethal
Much improved.

Still feels like you need more of a realistic storyline, add more character/introduce your fictional persona and talk to the surfer rather than just describing the scenarios. Make the thumbs bigger and brighter.

I'll work on that more. Maybe I can even put a link up with our pics and gives a little bio about us.

wethoney · 01-12-2003, 09:15 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by slapass
I like it! would the pics also lead to the join page? Not an expert just curious if those buttons would be it or not.

I was wondering that myself but didn't know if they surfer would say fuck it if they immediately go to the join page if they click on one of the girls images.

kocur26 · 01-12-2003, 09:15 PM

Much better. But the ultimate test is if it sells. Just because other webmasters like or dislike a design doesn't mean anything. Test it with traffic then test it some more.

wethoney · 01-12-2003, 09:17 PM

well I had a signup within about 5 minutes of the change so that is good ... ;)

Rockstar · 01-12-2003, 09:27 PM

Wethoney

That looks fantastic! Makes ME want to pull out the ole Credit Card........lol

pine · 01-12-2003, 09:32 PM

WAAAAY better. You sure it was you who went blind in photoshop?

wethoney · 01-12-2003, 09:36 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Rockstar
Wethoney

That looks fantastic! Makes ME want to pull out the ole Credit Card........lol

You guys think I should add another page of girls so there are 3 pages or leave it at 2?

wethoney · 01-12-2003, 09:37 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by pine
WAAAAY better. You sure it was you who went blind in photoshop?

Yep... I actually spent some time on it this time instead of slapping the shit together.

dacash · 01-12-2003, 09:43 PM

Kimmykim · 01-12-2003, 09:54 PM

That is much better than attempt number one, but you know what? You could have copied almost any reality site into that format.

Sit down, take what you have now, and decide how you can put it on a page so Joe Surfer will want to wank to whats inside.

You are on the right track, but here are a couple of obvious ones I noticed --

what a stale page -- no animation, nothing truly eyecatching and NO FREAKING LINK TO THE JOIN PAGE ON THE FIRST SCREEN WITHOUT SCROLLING.

I'm sorry, I hate to yell, but dude, if you dont tell a surfer to join over and over and make sure he can see it from every point in the page he is NOT GOING TO JOIN.

The marketing text is boring. Yes, I said boring. I don't want to hurt your feelings but go read what your competition is saying...

And last but not least, what's the point to the site? Is this like Bubble Girls, where the girls always cum, is this like videos, what is it????

You are making progress but if you want to see good conversions you still have a ways to go.

wethoney · 01-12-2003, 10:10 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Kimmykim
That is much better than attempt number one, but you know what? You could have copied almost any reality site into that format.

Sit down, take what you have now, and decide how you can put it on a page so Joe Surfer will want to wank to whats inside.

You are on the right track, but here are a couple of obvious ones I noticed --

what a stale page -- no animation, nothing truly eyecatching and NO FREAKING LINK TO THE JOIN PAGE ON THE FIRST SCREEN WITHOUT SCROLLING.

I'm sorry, I hate to yell, but dude, if you dont tell a surfer to join over and over and make sure he can see it from every point in the page he is NOT GOING TO JOIN.

The marketing text is boring. Yes, I said boring. I don't want to hurt your feelings but go read what your competition is saying...

And last but not least, what's the point to the site? Is this like Bubble Girls, where the girls always cum, is this like videos, what is it????

You are making progress but if you want to see good conversions you still have a ways to go.

Ok... As far as scrolling and the "stale" page I fixed that part sometimes I forget people still use 800x600 ;) There are 3 animated join buttons on every page do I need more?

Marketing text: are you referring to the "stories" on the right hand side? Doesn't it seem realistic enough? or is it just not dirtly enough. My content is a bit light right now is why I can't add in a lot of fancy shit and videos.

What would you suggest to make it more obvious as to the "point" of the site.

wethoney · 01-12-2003, 11:33 PM

Do you guys think I should have a 3rd page of content before it goes to the "order" page?

Socks · 01-12-2003, 11:43 PM

Does your site have exclusive original content shot by your company?

Voodoo · 01-12-2003, 11:49 PM

On this page:
http://www.wethoney.com/beta/1.html

You spelled "Mindy" as "Midy" in the bio.

Socks · 01-12-2003, 11:49 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Voodoo
On this page:
http://www.wethoney.com/beta/1.html

You spelled "Mindy" as "Midy" in the bio.

OHHHHH DISSSSS

wethoney · 01-12-2003, 11:53 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Socks
Does your site have exclusive original content shot by your company?

We I can't say we shoot 100% but it's pretty damn close

wethoney · 01-12-2003, 11:54 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Voodoo
On this page:
http://www.wethoney.com/beta/1.html

You spelled "Mindy" as "Midy" in the bio.

Yeah I know my partner already pointed that out to me...

I'm not much of a proof reader.

x3guide · 01-12-2003, 11:55 PM

fullsize sample of every model

wethoney · 01-12-2003, 11:56 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by x3guide
fullsize sample of every model

Hell If the surfer gets that there isn't much point in becoming a member.

p00p · 01-13-2003, 12:48 AM

Those animated gifs are annoying as hell....

Kimmykim · 01-13-2003, 01:55 AM

Ok now you've gone and overloaded the top with text again -- if you're going to use it up there, lets make it a smaller font and use stuff like bold, italics and underline to make it stand out.

Now, tell me this, what is so special about these girls? I can see pics of them? Hell, I can see pics of girls anywhere I want to AND I dont have to pay. Do you have video, do you have their personal sex diaries, what makes you different and worth the money??? Whatever it is tell the surfer, you have to talk him into pulling out his wallet, he's not going to just hand it over for no reason, no matter what you might wish.

Why does one page pop a second? That still makes no sense to me at all. You only pop an exit console on them as a full page as I see it. I could be wrong, I'm just telling you what I have seen work well.

All those thumbs of the girls, now those I would pop into a sized up javascript window that is the same size as the image (maybe 300x for the max on the image size) and then have a join link at the bottom of the image.

This page called order.html -- I am not sure what the purpose of this is, you're causing a surfer to have to click an additional time when you KNOW he is thinking about giving you money -- instead of seeing a place to enter the billing info, now he's got to look at all this? I realize you are trying to make it look like you've got more stuff, but this is the wrong time to do it. You could condense all these sites into a horizontally scrolling window on your other tour pages and have a neat effect without adding an additional page for the surfer to click thru to pay you.

OR if you don't want to do that, at least consider a two page join form. On page one, you can put all that stuff (a little more condensed and less spaced out I think) on the bottom of the page where you collect the surfers user name, password, email address and country of origin, which you then can populate into the Jettis form, while keeping a copy of the email for yourself in case they back out... and if you were to do any geo sorting -- something I would HIGHLY recommend, especially if you aren't going to have resellers, then you would have confirmed country of origin along with IP address to do so.

If any of this makes your nuts sweat, let me know and I'll stop making suggestions

This will be about the only time this year I give them out for free.

wethoney · 01-13-2003, 01:13 PM

It's a work in progress. I went ahead and dropped the font size down on the text and added in some font color, bold and italic as suggested. I also added a pop for the girls.

I'm having a problem with my pop though. If a person click on one of the pops before the page loads the rest of the page stops loading for some reason.

Any ideas.

I've never done a horizontal scroll box so I'll have to look that one up.

Wethoney

mrthumbs · 01-13-2003, 01:18 PM

better.

wethoney · 01-14-2003, 01:25 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by mrthumbs
better.

Ok Wethoney Final.. The "final" version is up with all recommended changes. Everyone let me know what you think.

01-12-2003, 08:56 PM	#1
wethoney So Fucking Banned Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 1,032	Wethoney Attempt # 2 Ok after many hours of work and nearly going blind working in Photoshop and I've come up with another tour since everyone thought my last attempt sucked ass. http://www.wethoney.com Tell me what you think.

01-12-2003, 08:58 PM	#2
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01-12-2003, 09:27 PM	#10
Rockstar Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 333	Wethoney That looks fantastic! Makes ME want to pull out the ole Credit Card........lol __________________ ICQ - 177606166

01-12-2003, 09:43 PM	#14
dacash Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: some where in a basement Posts: 609	__________________ ____________ Marc

01-12-2003, 09:02 PM	#4
Lethal Confirmed User Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 494	Much improved. Still feels like you need more of a realistic storyline, add more character/introduce your fictional persona and talk to the surfer rather than just describing the scenarios. Make the thumbs bigger and brighter.

01-12-2003, 09:08 PM	#5
slapass Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Earth Posts: 14,622	I like it! would the pics also lead to the join page? Not an expert just curious if those buttons would be it or not.

01-12-2003, 09:15 PM	#8
kocur26 Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2002 Posts: 191	Much better. But the ultimate test is if it sells. Just because other webmasters like or dislike a design doesn't mean anything. Test it with traffic then test it some more.

01-12-2003, 09:17 PM	#9
wethoney So Fucking Banned Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 1,032	well I had a signup within about 5 minutes of the change so that is good ... ;)

01-12-2003, 09:32 PM	#11
pine Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: The Falls, eh Posts: 1,373	WAAAAY better. You sure it was you who went blind in photoshop?

01-12-2003, 09:54 PM	#15
Kimmykim bitchslapping zebras!!!!! Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: In a shack by the beach Posts: 16,015	That is much better than attempt number one, but you know what? You could have copied almost any reality site into that format. Sit down, take what you have now, and decide how you can put it on a page so Joe Surfer will want to wank to whats inside. You are on the right track, but here are a couple of obvious ones I noticed -- what a stale page -- no animation, nothing truly eyecatching and NO FREAKING LINK TO THE JOIN PAGE ON THE FIRST SCREEN WITHOUT SCROLLING. I'm sorry, I hate to yell, but dude, if you dont tell a surfer to join over and over and make sure he can see it from every point in the page he is NOT GOING TO JOIN. The marketing text is boring. Yes, I said boring. I don't want to hurt your feelings but go read what your competition is saying... And last but not least, what's the point to the site? Is this like Bubble Girls, where the girls always cum, is this like videos, what is it???? You are making progress but if you want to see good conversions you still have a ways to go.

01-12-2003, 11:33 PM	#17
wethoney So Fucking Banned Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 1,032	Do you guys think I should have a 3rd page of content before it goes to the "order" page?

01-12-2003, 11:43 PM	#18
Socks Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: May 2002 Location: Toronto Posts: 8,475	Does your site have exclusive original content shot by your company?

01-12-2003, 11:49 PM	#19
Voodoo ♥ ♦ ♣ ♠ Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Porn Valley, CA Posts: 10,590	On this page: http://www.wethoney.com/beta/1.html You spelled "Mindy" as "Midy" in the bio. __________________ "I'm selflessly supporting the common good, but only coincidentally looking out for No.1."

01-12-2003, 11:55 PM	#23
x3guide Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: lake titicaca Posts: 735	fullsize sample of every model __________________ Shomer fuckin shabbas

01-13-2003, 12:48 AM	#25
p00p Confirmed User Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: CanaDUH Posts: 5,125	Those animated gifs are annoying as hell....

01-13-2003, 01:55 AM	#26
Kimmykim bitchslapping zebras!!!!! Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2001 Location: In a shack by the beach Posts: 16,015	Ok now you've gone and overloaded the top with text again -- if you're going to use it up there, lets make it a smaller font and use stuff like bold, italics and underline to make it stand out. Now, tell me this, what is so special about these girls? I can see pics of them? Hell, I can see pics of girls anywhere I want to AND I dont have to pay. Do you have video, do you have their personal sex diaries, what makes you different and worth the money??? Whatever it is tell the surfer, you have to talk him into pulling out his wallet, he's not going to just hand it over for no reason, no matter what you might wish. Why does one page pop a second? That still makes no sense to me at all. You only pop an exit console on them as a full page as I see it. I could be wrong, I'm just telling you what I have seen work well. All those thumbs of the girls, now those I would pop into a sized up javascript window that is the same size as the image (maybe 300x for the max on the image size) and then have a join link at the bottom of the image. This page called order.html -- I am not sure what the purpose of this is, you're causing a surfer to have to click an additional time when you KNOW he is thinking about giving you money -- instead of seeing a place to enter the billing info, now he's got to look at all this? I realize you are trying to make it look like you've got more stuff, but this is the wrong time to do it. You could condense all these sites into a horizontally scrolling window on your other tour pages and have a neat effect without adding an additional page for the surfer to click thru to pay you. OR if you don't want to do that, at least consider a two page join form. On page one, you can put all that stuff (a little more condensed and less spaced out I think) on the bottom of the page where you collect the surfers user name, password, email address and country of origin, which you then can populate into the Jettis form, while keeping a copy of the email for yourself in case they back out... and if you were to do any geo sorting -- something I would HIGHLY recommend, especially if you aren't going to have resellers, then you would have confirmed country of origin along with IP address to do so. If any of this makes your nuts sweat, let me know and I'll stop making suggestions This will be about the only time this year I give them out for free.

01-13-2003, 01:13 PM	#27
wethoney So Fucking Banned Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 1,032	It's a work in progress. I went ahead and dropped the font size down on the text and added in some font color, bold and italic as suggested. I also added a pop for the girls. I'm having a problem with my pop though. If a person click on one of the pops before the page loads the rest of the page stops loading for some reason. Any ideas. I've never done a horizontal scroll box so I'll have to look that one up. Wethoney

01-13-2003, 01:18 PM	#28
mrthumbs salad tossing sig guy Join Date: Apr 2002 Location: mrthumbs*gmail.com Posts: 11,702	better.