| harvey |
10-10-2010 12:32 PM |
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Originally Posted by ArielRebel
(Post 17593457)
I'm currently working on the coming soon page for her site (www.EyeCandyMandy.com) and here's where I am up to date! The launch of the official website will be around December (if everything goes the way it goes now) Mandy is SO MOTIVATED and VERY ACTIVE with her fans and everybody seem to like her up to date. She put a lot of efforts in her upcoming website and will be adding ton's of cool features that I'm sure you guys will really like to promote...
I just wanted to show off a bit the design so you guys can tell me what you think and maybe what you think would look cool to add or modify Again keep in mind that this is not the final product for the coming soon page... only a first draft
http://arielrebel.com/ariel/blogging...comingsoon.jpg
Tks in advance for all your constructive comments :)
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I'm not a big fan of that pink bg, I'd give more prominence to the grunge part and use less of that pink (maybe only for the text) while adding small touches of a darker pink-fuchsia (maybe splats of color), just getting to her hair color to make her personal characteristics be part of the design. Also, if it was me, I'd use that black shape or brush on the lower corner be behind her so it looks more like a design element rather than something covering her for no reason. Finally, there's a huge gap between the logo and the first picture (=content) I assume you'll use that for titles and/or slogans, but mentioning it just in case.
If you still want to use that paper sheet, try this: rotate it a few degrees so it has some dynamic, and use a yellowish white color for it with some grunge paper treatment. I think that could work, anyway, try it by yourself and see if you like it, after all that's what matters :2 cents: |
