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MaDalton 01-12-2011 06:28 PM

So I made a 4 Minute Video Trailer/Best of... let me know what you think...
 
http://www.czechsuperstars.com/join.html

:)

DEA - banned for life 01-12-2011 06:30 PM

very clean.4mins is somewhat long though.chicks from countries that have the letters Z and I in them are always hot..good work :)

MaDalton 01-12-2011 06:42 PM

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Originally Posted by DEA (Post 17840332)
very clean.4mins is somewhat long though.chicks from countries that have the letters Z and I in them are always hot..good work :)

thx ;)

the trailer for the separate sites are always like 1:30 but here i wanted to get content from all 6 sites in there.

SteveHardeman 01-12-2011 06:47 PM

I think......I'm moving. Clean out the spare room cuz I'm gonna live with you.

I think it's a very hot video but I don't know that I'd put it on my join form. Once they get that far, I don't want much to distract them.

MaDalton 01-12-2011 08:14 PM

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Originally Posted by SteveHardeman (Post 17840378)
I think......I'm moving. Clean out the spare room cuz I'm gonna live with you.

I think it's a very hot video but I don't know that I'd put it on my join form. Once they get that far, I don't want much to distract them.

you might have a point there - on the other hand that site doesnt have a tour and had no trailer until today and made more signups than some of our sites with tour and trailer. i'll watch it closely

Grapesoda 01-12-2011 08:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MaDalton (Post 17840326)

did ya make one without dicks?

MaDalton 01-12-2011 08:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bm bradley (Post 17840545)
did ya make one without dicks?

for those sites without dicks - yes

like this one: http://www.allthoseboobs.com/join.html

Grapesoda 01-12-2011 08:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MaDalton (Post 17840554)
for those sites without dicks - yes

like this one: http://www.allthoseboobs.com/join.html

yeah I'm not much into the dick... too bad I'm not a boob man either :(

Twoface31 01-13-2011 02:09 AM

your clips are cool its great.............

SGS 01-13-2011 02:26 AM

Great trailers but 4 minutes on a join page? I would experiment a bit more with that.

justfreemovies 01-13-2011 02:27 AM

nice work

HomerSimpson 01-13-2011 02:49 AM

nice work, but music seems bit too aggressive...

Jack Sparrow 01-13-2011 03:39 AM

Nice trailer.

But.. i wouldnt have made it into a cumshot compilation. More of a teaser would have been better to get people to join. But thats just my humble opinion.

Paul Markham 01-13-2011 05:03 AM

Sorry didn't like it. Too long, too aggressive music and not about the girls more about guys coming. On a join page. :)

djroof 01-13-2011 05:08 AM

nice link....

cooldude7 01-13-2011 05:30 AM

ur video is too long, it gave me hard on.,
on join page video shouldn't be that long.,

u wanna close the sale/deal as soon as possible. and not giving him the 4min video out side.

IMHO

CaptainHowdy 01-13-2011 05:36 AM

Looks great! Too bad I don't masturbate...

Bhunter 01-13-2011 05:45 AM

I came before I realized there was a join button

MaDalton 01-13-2011 07:04 AM

i'm probably too desensitized, i couldn't jerk to that - lol

on the other hand - whats a 4 min clip compared to tubes full of free full length scenes?

ottopottomouse 01-13-2011 08:33 AM

The most persuasive teaser vids i've seen fade out before the cumshot.

Caligari 01-13-2011 08:46 AM

great looking video!
1st)i would take if off the join page - as others said it's distracting from clicking the join button.
2nd)i would make it 3 mins max and make some of the more lengthy "lingering shots" shorter.
3rd)i would reverse order of edits and have most or all of the cumshots at the end. start with the foreplay-masturbation clips, go to the sex-oral sex clips, then to the cumshots. last 30 seconds a succession of the best money shots...

on edit- and make those money shots even shorter for more tease factor.

MaDalton 01-13-2011 08:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Caligari (Post 17841618)
great looking video!
1st)i would take if off the join page - as others said it's distracting from clicking the join button.
2nd)i would make it 3 mins max and make some of the more lengthy "lingering shots" shorter.
3rd)i would reverse order of edits and have most or all of the cumshots at the end. start with the foreplay-masturbation clips, go to the sex-oral sex clips, then to the cumshots. last 30 seconds a succession of the best money shots...

on edit- and make those money shots even shorter for more tease factor.

thanks for the constructive critisism, that's something i can work with :)

Caligari 01-13-2011 08:54 AM

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Originally Posted by MaDalton (Post 17841622)
thanks for the constructive critisism, that's something i can work with :)

you are welcome!

also, i am not familiar with the czech superstars sites, is this relatively new? are you running xxxpayday.com? always good to see some more gonzo!

SZNY 01-13-2011 08:55 AM

Maybe make a photo slider in the join page to highlight the benefits of joining that specific paysite combined with some photo shots

And put a shorter edited version of the teasers on the mainpages

MaDalton 01-13-2011 09:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Caligari (Post 17841627)
you are welcome!

also, i am not familiar with the czech superstars sites, is this relatively new? are you running xxxpayday.com? always good to see some more gonzo!

yes, yes and thanks :)

alexchechs 01-13-2011 09:41 AM

Nice work, great looking content

JOKER 01-13-2011 10:01 AM

Most has already been said...

-- too much, wrong page.

-- shorten it to max 1 or 2 "shots" per featured site, take it easy with the dicks / cumshots

-- less is more, less "shots" per site, less hardcore, let them pay for the[ir] "moneyshot"

-- move the video to the frontpage in between the top and bottom row of the site "badges"

-- lose the large facebook ad on the frontpage, you want to funnel traffic from facebook TO your site, not the other way around - they don't need your traffic that bad.
You can add that into the Members area for member updates / reminders / interaction or just keep a LIKE button - less is more.

-- make the video the center of attention, make it short, sweet and near climax get them to the Joinpage ASAP, make the joinprocess as simple and painless as you can.

Just my :2 cents:

Sid70 01-13-2011 10:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MaDalton (Post 17840326)

are you immune to porn to do such stuff ;) ?

Paul Markham 01-13-2011 10:18 AM

Take it off the the join page.

If it's for a big tit site it starts out good, if it's for a Czech Super Stars site it's not.

For that it would need to be more about the girls appearing and named.

I's too much of one thing at the start, change the clips to show variety.

Take out he old women, mixing MILF and normal age doesn't work.

Merge the clips not just straight cuts.

What was the ad for different sites doing in the middle?

As "The home of Gonzo porn" where was the gonzo?

You know me Stefan I'm a tough audience. :1orglaugh

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sid70 (Post 17841847)
are you immune to porn to do such stuff ;) ?

My 1 cents.

If you're immune to porn you can't create it. Imagine an anorexic chef.

JOKER 01-13-2011 10:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Paul Markham (Post 17841857)

[...]

If you're immune to porn you can't create it. Imagine an anorexic chef.


Not sure who said it here, I think it was Choker a few years ago...

It was along the lines of:

If you want to know if your galleries / paysite tours etc. convert, whip your dick out and start to jerk it... if you make it to the final step of the joinform before you cum you're fine.

Paul Markham 01-13-2011 10:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JOKER | JOKEREMPIRE Inc. (Post 17841867)
Not sure who said it here, I think it was Choker a few years ago...

It was along the lines of:

If you want to know if your galleries / paysite tours etc. convert, whip your dick out and start to jerk it... if you make it to the final step of the joinform before you cum you're fine.

Eva loved shooting the girls and so did one of our assistants. For the normal reasons. :1orglaugh

The make up artist was totally immune to it and even so she shot some beautiful leg type sets. She loved beauty so that's what motivated her.

Whatever you do you need to love it to do it well. IMO

Many people ask why after 30 years I hadn't quit. I was working with naked, good looking 18 to 25 year old naked chicks. They were working at a keyboard. Go figure how much they love their job. :1orglaugh

pornguy 01-13-2011 10:45 AM

I like the trailer.. Did not watch it all cause of time. but in the 30 seconds I see it shows a lot of cum shots on the tits but no boobie banging as the title at the begenning says. bang my boobies.

MaDalton 01-13-2011 10:47 AM

that join page btw will change anyways soon and the video will go to the tour.

but i still appreciate constructive critisism for the video, it was my first longer one and i am surely no professional editor

V2 coming soon :)

Sid70 01-13-2011 12:16 PM

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Cherry7 01-13-2011 02:14 PM

How did you find some many ugly woman in a country famous for beautiful ones...?

fpaul90 01-13-2011 02:56 PM

Video is bad ass! nice cumshots and hot chicks

frank7799 01-13-2011 03:38 PM

Nice videoclip.

I was sexually attracted to this clip for about 2:30 minutes. So in my opinion it should be a bit shorter.
And there are way too many cumshots in it for a join page. Personally Iīm more aroused when those cumshots are missing. Of course I canīt tell what your surfers think about it.

Shap 01-13-2011 03:43 PM

doesn't work for me

MaDalton 01-13-2011 03:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shap (Post 17842835)
doesn't work for me

sorry, my server had a power issue - should work now


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