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So I made a 4 Minute Video Trailer/Best of... let me know what you think...
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very clean.4mins is somewhat long though.chicks from countries that have the letters Z and I in them are always hot..good work :)
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the trailer for the separate sites are always like 1:30 but here i wanted to get content from all 6 sites in there. |
I think......I'm moving. Clean out the spare room cuz I'm gonna live with you.
I think it's a very hot video but I don't know that I'd put it on my join form. Once they get that far, I don't want much to distract them. |
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like this one: http://www.allthoseboobs.com/join.html |
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your clips are cool its great.............
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Great trailers but 4 minutes on a join page? I would experiment a bit more with that.
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nice work
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nice work, but music seems bit too aggressive...
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Nice trailer.
But.. i wouldnt have made it into a cumshot compilation. More of a teaser would have been better to get people to join. But thats just my humble opinion. |
Sorry didn't like it. Too long, too aggressive music and not about the girls more about guys coming. On a join page. :)
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nice link....
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ur video is too long, it gave me hard on.,
on join page video shouldn't be that long., u wanna close the sale/deal as soon as possible. and not giving him the 4min video out side. IMHO |
Looks great! Too bad I don't masturbate...
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I came before I realized there was a join button
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i'm probably too desensitized, i couldn't jerk to that - lol
on the other hand - whats a 4 min clip compared to tubes full of free full length scenes? |
The most persuasive teaser vids i've seen fade out before the cumshot.
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great looking video!
1st)i would take if off the join page - as others said it's distracting from clicking the join button. 2nd)i would make it 3 mins max and make some of the more lengthy "lingering shots" shorter. 3rd)i would reverse order of edits and have most or all of the cumshots at the end. start with the foreplay-masturbation clips, go to the sex-oral sex clips, then to the cumshots. last 30 seconds a succession of the best money shots... on edit- and make those money shots even shorter for more tease factor. |
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also, i am not familiar with the czech superstars sites, is this relatively new? are you running xxxpayday.com? always good to see some more gonzo! |
Maybe make a photo slider in the join page to highlight the benefits of joining that specific paysite combined with some photo shots
And put a shorter edited version of the teasers on the mainpages |
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Nice work, great looking content
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Most has already been said...
-- too much, wrong page. -- shorten it to max 1 or 2 "shots" per featured site, take it easy with the dicks / cumshots -- less is more, less "shots" per site, less hardcore, let them pay for the[ir] "moneyshot" -- move the video to the frontpage in between the top and bottom row of the site "badges" -- lose the large facebook ad on the frontpage, you want to funnel traffic from facebook TO your site, not the other way around - they don't need your traffic that bad. You can add that into the Members area for member updates / reminders / interaction or just keep a LIKE button - less is more. -- make the video the center of attention, make it short, sweet and near climax get them to the Joinpage ASAP, make the joinprocess as simple and painless as you can. Just my :2 cents: |
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Take it off the the join page.
If it's for a big tit site it starts out good, if it's for a Czech Super Stars site it's not. For that it would need to be more about the girls appearing and named. I's too much of one thing at the start, change the clips to show variety. Take out he old women, mixing MILF and normal age doesn't work. Merge the clips not just straight cuts. What was the ad for different sites doing in the middle? As "The home of Gonzo porn" where was the gonzo? You know me Stefan I'm a tough audience. :1orglaugh Quote:
If you're immune to porn you can't create it. Imagine an anorexic chef. |
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Not sure who said it here, I think it was Choker a few years ago... It was along the lines of: If you want to know if your galleries / paysite tours etc. convert, whip your dick out and start to jerk it... if you make it to the final step of the joinform before you cum you're fine. |
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The make up artist was totally immune to it and even so she shot some beautiful leg type sets. She loved beauty so that's what motivated her. Whatever you do you need to love it to do it well. IMO Many people ask why after 30 years I hadn't quit. I was working with naked, good looking 18 to 25 year old naked chicks. They were working at a keyboard. Go figure how much they love their job. :1orglaugh |
I like the trailer.. Did not watch it all cause of time. but in the 30 seconds I see it shows a lot of cum shots on the tits but no boobie banging as the title at the begenning says. bang my boobies.
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that join page btw will change anyways soon and the video will go to the tour.
but i still appreciate constructive critisism for the video, it was my first longer one and i am surely no professional editor V2 coming soon :) |
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How did you find some many ugly woman in a country famous for beautiful ones...?
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Video is bad ass! nice cumshots and hot chicks
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Nice videoclip.
I was sexually attracted to this clip for about 2:30 minutes. So in my opinion it should be a bit shorter. And there are way too many cumshots in it for a join page. Personally Iīm more aroused when those cumshots are missing. Of course I canīt tell what your surfers think about it. |
doesn't work for me
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