Finishing paysite - feedback appreciated:)
 

Hi guys!
I`m finally putting online my site www.nastycamera.com with aff. program. Please could some try for me webmaster join (what is on bottom of index page) and tell me if everything work ok?

Another thing...my english is not that good:) so text for each movie is probably not that good...also could some nice persone here help me about that?


Thank you!

Lack of content.

Shocking footage from school clas. Three girls prepared something for class nerd. They punished her, write on her face, that she`s a bitch and tear her pantyhose. What`s more..they forced her to lick their pussies, but as you will see, she like it a lot so in fact it was not a punishment. BTW in next part, teacher will find out..

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Incredible 4 girl action footage filmed in a college classroom. Three girls pick on the class nerd. They humiliate her, write bitch on her face, rip her pantyhose and force her to lick their young delicate pussies. However, as you will find out, that didn't really punish her much, as it turns out she lapped it up. Stay tuned for part two, where their teacher walks in and catches them...

You need this fixed professionally. Fortunately, it's one of the things I do. So email damian AT adultmarketing DOT co DOT uk

Denny : I know...I have lot more, what I`ll add in following days/weeks.

DamianJ : thanks man! Will contact you in email.

i think the english diction adds a nice touch dont take it so seriously, go torbe style

not bad at all. good luck

thanks! most is my own production lol

Yeah, you need someone good with English to rewrite some of your text.

Agreed.

There are a few pro writers on here aren't there?

A failure waiting to happen. Don't take it wrong, but it has so many issues you'll find yourself wasting money and wondering why you can't make a sale. Just as an appetizer: You're using a tube style, you have 12 scenes and you want to charge $30 to see those scenes, when any tube site has thousands with better quality and for free. You have no navigation, the "czech" angle isn't original (anybody knows that a lot of the content they see today comes from there), the layout is bland, nothing stands out... well, it's like you're leaving no room for the slight opportunity to succeed. I'd recommend you to get more content, get rid of "Czech" and change it to EURO and get a proper layout, even a super horrible amateur one, but something with a little bit of personality that won't be forgotten the minute you leave the site. Just my :2 cents:, of course

I watched the first video for a second and closed it because the guys in it are unbelieveably annoying. I wanted to punch them in their stupid slave Russian faces.

uh whats the split for webmasters?? might wanna put that general info on there before we sign up.

:2 cents:

It's NastyCamera.com not www.nastycamera.com:2 cents:

Wanted to see what you were talking about... that blond kid is fucking obnoxious.

the videos have some personality. good job mate. don't change a think.

Thanks...but they are not Russian...if you can`t recognize russian and czech, I`m sorry for you..but many americans still don`t know where the Czech republic is located so you are just one of them:)

My bad...will add.. 50/50

get someone to clean up the engrish i like the rest.

Thank you Harvey, I`ll take some of your comments in my mind.

Thanks, I hope, I will find somebody here for nice english descriptions :))

hit up the magician in this thread. or a guy named fatfoo.

And one more thing Garce... I don`t like racism so if you do, please don`t write into my threads, thank you.

looks great
going to list you at Signbucks.com soon

thanks Daizzzy

Hmm, not sure about your site concept. Sure, your niche seems to be "Czech", however you mix Mature, Teen and Babe/Pornstar type of content. This could work, but only if you have a HUGE amount of content. Otherwise I'd say it's hard to sell on niched traffic :2 cents:

You have point...but that`s what I shoot, so I have to try sell it:) I dont have thousands of mature and teen vids so I have to sell what I have. Lets see if it will work or not.