Help needed- new landing page.
 

Hi all,
i`m new here and need a little advice about the www.nicoluna.com hom page.
Right now i use a www.nicoluna.com start page as a landing page for the trafic i buy, and i`m not sure it`s a good choice.

I have create another layout:
new intro

What do You think, witch one of them should convert better or what should i add, remove e.t.c.?
i`m still learning so forgive me this stupid question ;).
Please, review.
Chears
Vin

Both links seem to follow the same script for me? :p

The first one is better looking, the second one seems to be more orderly.

what would be the purposes you do demand for??

I sell memberships on this website and this is my purpose ;). I`m trying to chose a layout of the landing page to convert visits to sale. My current looks well but i`m not sure it`s good as a landing page.

The new intro is better. It smacked me in the face and I wanted me to see more. I think it will hold the viewers attention more that the first 2.