New Designer TGP Sample Design - What do you think? [pic]
 

Hi there.

I've been talking to a friend of mine who graduated from a graphic design college and he is interested in getting into some adult design. Thing is he has never done a TGP, Gallery, Tour or anything like that (and apparently he's not into porn I guess :disgust ) so I am trying to show him the ropes a lil' bit since I've been working at this for a year now.

He sent me this sample to a project I threw at him, it doesn't look perfect to me yet, not feeling the colors and it could use some work BUT I think the guy has some serious potential. I told him, make it look good like www.hqgal.com and explained to him the layout.

Interested in the GFY feedback on this, be brutal if you must, but please be constructive. I'm not all that experienced yet but I want to help this guy out and your opinions will help.

Small version:

http://www.xthumbzone.com/humpzone_sm.jpg

Larger version:

http://www.xthumbzone.com/humpzone.jpg


Thanks!

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