New TGP Design - Check it out!! By new aspiring adult designer...
 

Hey.

Posted this yesterday, thread died with no response, so I'm posting again... :(

What do you think about this TGP design?

SAMPLE #1

http://www.xthumbzone.com/humpzone_sm.jpg

click for larger image:

SAMPLE #2

http://www.xthumbzone.com/humpzone2.jpg

These are from a friend of mine who graduated from a graphic design college and he is interested in getting into some adult design. He has never done a TGP, gallery, tour or anything like that (and apparently he's not into porn I guess) so I am trying to show him the ropes a little bit since I've been working at this stuff for a year now.

Any constructive comments?? :winkwink:

can we buy them on ebay? :winkwink: Seriously though, they look pretty good. Pricing?

Hahaha, no more eBay for me. :1orglaugh

No prices yet, trying to get my friend into "adult design mode"...

Here is some of his other (non-adult) stuff:

http://www.xthumbzone.com/chillin.jpg

http://www.xthumbzone.com/gniussite.jpg

http://www.xthumbzone.com/pencil.jpg

http://www.xthumbzone.com/babygnius.jpg

Hope he doesn't mind me posting this! :Oh crap

looks a lot like this guys work www.linnwinkle.com/

He's got style!

haven't seen my guy do faces yet, only characters with hats real low...

damn, he can illustrate, thats for sure. get him into this bizz...

his nonadult stuff looks good, the tgps are not worth anything.

thats the idea!

sooo what are your suggestions to make it look better? we need to be constructive here... :disgust

advice to make it better? Hire bluewire to redo it :thumbsup


LOL...Just kidding :winkwink: Thats actually some really cool stuff. Nice work :thumbsup

LoL, hey Mike. :1orglaugh

We are still considering you to do our mainstream site, don't worry man! :winkwink:

More comments about the TGP design please. What should I tell him?

I'm saying the blue and green backgrounds are too harsh, so maybe white background..? Maybe add some texture to it, make it look more alive, like mesh or something.

its pretty nice i like it

thank you.

any comments from the day crew? :pimp

I think the TGP would look better with the blue background, instead of a green one. I think he should take the yellow backing for the thumbs on the green page and add it to the thumbs on the yellow page. Also, maybe make the section titles a different shade of blue. For instance:

Keep "TODAY" the same color, but make "YESTERDAY" a little darker then "TODAY", then make "2 DAYS AGO" a little darker than "YESTERDAY", etc.

That's about all I can suggest, otherwise, I think the page design and the non-adult stuff looks pretty good.

Tell him to keep up the good work and let us know when it's finished!

later
c-lo

Good stuff, his work looks like he used be a graff artist.

thanks for the advice man, more posts like this one please! :upsidedow

yep, he's edumacated in graphic design. :thumbsup

so you arent leaving the adult industry like you said 100 times on ebay?

good looking stuff

you got some skills

nah, i knew you would miss me fris, so i decided to stay... :1orglaugh



thanks guys!!

please comment some more on my designers TGP design!

:) Just glad to help out


P.S. I like some of your designs on Rezilient.net...especially the Bikini Top 10 and the Massive one.

later
c-lo

It looks more mainstream but it still looks pretty good.

thanks.

:thumbsup

any more suggestions?

bump after GFY downage.