id like some feedback on my first designs
 

and some advices too. tnx
http://www.getapussy.com/index.jpg


http://www.getapussy.com/index1.jpg


http://www.getapussy.com/index2.jpg

critics advices please

looks nice for me

Hey you all, give Bary some feedback, I let him do these for me for free so he could build up a portfolio

jeez, someone critque this shit...LOL

too many gradient glows and drop shadows.

IMO

Overall not bad for a first effort.

I'd swap out some of the fonts, though. They look somewhat dated and kinda' retro. And I agree with the other comment about the drop shadows being somewhat over-used.

Pink text on pink background is a little difficult to read.

And the compositing needs some additional work in places (dark blue background showing through the model's hair in one of the pics near the bottom).

Seen worse over the years. A little tweak and polish and it'll be better.

Just my :2 cents:

not bad for your first

tnx guys