How is it?
 

About to put this online, just a little feedback before doing it
http://www.fdsign.com/splash-final.html :)

Eye catching page. Fire good.


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logo part doesn't look right to me.

thanx for the feedback! Anyone else please?

To me it appears rushed, spend more time on your design.

Logo flows rough to smooth and back again. Not even, hard to look at, I don't like white pixels in upper coner, to distractive and out of place, give it a solid smoother look and you will be there, just my two cents, I ain't no designer:)

Love it! :thumbsup The second page is better than splash, that 3D scape and flash is something serious. However, I think it's too over the edge for adult biz. And for prices, you'd ask more, you look like a pro and then you charge that little? Sounds fishy, maybe you'd take off the price list. But I won't hire you, so don't pay me attention :)

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Fishy? Why, if it's true? I'm looking to make a bigger portfolio, that's why I'm giving it so unexpensive, but only on September, this won't last forever. So if you need to hire a designer at a very unexpensive rate, here's your chance, you can also have your own pay site! ;) After all, Lawrence Connor has his own domain! :1orglaugh

and Lawrence is the name for "that touch" of style! :thumbsup