Need feedback on our LesArchive.com Preview Movie
 

The makers of the webs highest rated Teen Paysite TeenDreams.com are about to launch LesArchive.com, which will instantly become the webs biggest Lesbian Paysite (almost twice the size of industry leader SapphicErotica.com). So we are looking for feedback on our preview movie which will sit on the homepage (in Flash format) and be provided to legal tube sites, and affiliates alike.

http://www.lesarchive.com/lesarchive.wmv

Please let us know what you think in terms of quality, composition, and content. Would it sell the webs biggest Lesbian site to you ?

Negative criticism is very welcome. (but positive is also good)

Looks good man.. Now I have to clean up the jizz from my computer screen.

Hello Gordon,

I've just watched your trialer and its pretty good (I like it when the girls are waving goodbye at the end of this movie!). Cant wait to send some traffic to this one!

:)

Looks very nice to me...

I just didn't like the fonts you guys used in it so much, but that's no biggie.

We can change fonts, Something a little bolder you think is better?

Seems to do the job then :)

Very nice trailer! Perhaps you could change the font to the same used in the logo? Just a suggestion.

There was text in those trailers?