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$5 submissions 11-21-2008 02:01 AM

Which do you think look better? (PICS)
 
http://i359.photobucket.com/albums/o...bmaster1-1.png

OR


http://i359.photobucket.com/albums/o...bmaster2-1.png


OR

http://i359.photobucket.com/albums/o...webmaster3.png

CashGordon 11-21-2008 02:04 AM

the top one

AnalProbe 11-21-2008 02:06 AM

Yep, the first one.

Last one is not bad either...

You should change the URL on the bottom, not spilt, and in capitals :

WEBMASTERLABOR.COM

with a smaller fontsize to make it fit... keep the color change for .COM (like in #3)

Don't worry, they can read it !

PersianKitty 11-21-2008 02:07 AM

First one

$5 submissions 11-21-2008 02:17 AM

Thanks, bro. I appreciate the detailed feedback. I'm having variations done per your feedback.

Quote:

Originally Posted by AnalProbe (Post 15085624)
Yep, the first one.

Last one is not bad either...

You should change the URL on the bottom, not spilt, and in capitals :

WEBMASTERLABOR.COM

with a smaller fontsize to make it fit... keep the color change for .COM (like in #3)

Don't worry, they can read it !


aico 11-21-2008 02:39 AM

#1, and like said, make the url all one line, all caps

HomerSimpson 11-21-2008 02:50 AM

1st one looks best

Double trouble 11-21-2008 03:38 AM

First one is good

Corleone 11-21-2008 04:05 AM

first one

viencarl 11-21-2008 04:12 AM

first one too :):):)

Iron Fist 11-21-2008 04:14 AM

Top one caught my eye first and was easiest to read.

Bojangles 11-21-2008 04:17 AM

First one.

BigSicK 11-21-2008 05:07 AM

uno is the best

Dirty Lord 11-21-2008 05:19 AM

I like the second one!

Sid70 11-21-2008 05:23 AM

#1 fo sho

HorseShit 11-21-2008 06:09 AM

one does but they all look pretty cheap and 1999ish

tranza 11-21-2008 06:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jdavis (Post 15086120)
one does but they all look pretty cheap and 1999ish

I second that.

:2 cents:

$5 submissions 11-21-2008 06:39 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by jdavis (Post 15086120)
one does but they all look pretty cheap and 1999ish

Thanks for the blunt assessment, I really appreciate it. Truly. Just so I can have it revised--what would make it less "cheap" looking? Better fonts? Better aliasing?

J. Falcon 11-21-2008 06:40 AM

The first one looks good.

whatusay 11-21-2008 06:42 AM

The first one is the best, take url from 3rd, in same line :)

emac 11-21-2008 06:42 AM

first one is cool man! :thumbsup

pawsregd 11-21-2008 06:45 AM

The first one

Max - RiotDesign 11-21-2008 06:54 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by $5 submissions (Post 15086292)
Thanks for the blunt assessment, I really appreciate it. Truly. Just so I can have it revised--what would make it less "cheap" looking? Better fonts? Better aliasing?

Probably you need to add some eye candy (some background graphics, be more creative with the type, etc.) to give it some style... and the oval shape with the text on it doesnt look very modern at all :2 cents:

$5 submissions 11-21-2008 07:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Max - RiotDesign (Post 15086391)
Probably you need to add some eye candy (some background graphics, be more creative with the type, etc.) to give it some style... and the oval shape with the text on it doesnt look very modern at all :2 cents:

Thanks, I'll add that to the revision notes. Please keep the feedback coming, guys.

raven1083 11-21-2008 07:19 AM

i go for the 1st one

Spunky 11-21-2008 07:21 AM

The first one looks good

Fucksakes 11-21-2008 07:28 AM

They are all pretty simple looking, making it hard to choose from the 3, even the oral runs off one side and not the other. font looks plain..

looks like a graphic guy in training, learning to make orals and gradiants colors.

Just trying to say as much bad as I can, hoping to help ya.. I remember I used to do the same way back when building sites.. I used to ask ppl that hated me.. so they would trash me.. and it only helped me.

Serial Pervert 11-21-2008 07:30 AM

Number 1

$5 submissions 11-21-2008 07:34 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fucksakes (Post 15086477)
Just trying to say as much bad as I can, hoping to help ya.. I remember I used to do the same way back when building sites.. I used to ask ppl that hated me.. so they would trash me.. and it only helped me.

Exactly. I know where you're coming from and what you mean. The best teachers are critics and skeptics. When I first started out offering outsourced text and labor services here I caught a lot of flames :) Many of my critics later became friends and even clients. It's all part of the process and it can only lead to better results, if perceived for what it truly is--an opportunity to learn the market's sentiment and needs and an opportunity to prove myself.

Back to the design:

I'll add your comments to the revision notes. Thanks!

Keep the feedback going, guys.

Scott McD 11-21-2008 07:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AnalProbe (Post 15085624)
Yep, the first one.

Last one is not bad either...

You should change the URL on the bottom, not spilt, and in capitals :

WEBMASTERLABOR.COM

with a smaller fontsize to make it fit... keep the color change for .COM (like in #3)

Don't worry, they can read it !

Just like he said... :2 cents::2 cents:

brassmonkey 11-21-2008 07:38 AM

#1 but i like #2 as well

Fucksakes 11-21-2008 07:56 AM

lmfao, ok so I tried to make a point.. my first time ever attempting to make something in photoshop besides cropping images.. I'll give this person more credit but you get my point.

http://www.dannyrichards.com/test.jpg

im going to get a coffee.. I should attempt other things first thing in the morning.

bobby666 11-21-2008 08:02 AM

i prefer the first

BV 11-21-2008 08:08 AM

lose the $ sign, use cents and rotate the .com 90 deg. to the right and free transform it to fit

CaptainHowdy 11-21-2008 08:22 AM

The third one does it for me...

alexchechs 11-21-2008 09:38 AM

top one looks best out of those

bbm 11-21-2008 10:56 AM

Firts :) :)

Chosen 11-21-2008 11:03 AM

First one :)

amandaspost 11-21-2008 11:06 AM

My vote goes for the first one :)

Supz 11-21-2008 11:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SexTronix (Post 15085618)
the top one

i agree top one

Chicks Delivery 11-21-2008 12:36 PM

The first one!

A-n-D-r-E-S 11-21-2008 12:42 PM

I'd go with #1.

Isradude 11-21-2008 12:43 PM

first one ... :)

HorseShit 11-21-2008 12:52 PM

none of them

Marky333 11-21-2008 12:56 PM

The first one for sure! it's the kind that steal your view

$5 submissions 11-21-2008 02:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BV (Post 15086657)
lose the $ sign, use cents and rotate the .com 90 deg. to the right and free transform it to fit

Thanks, BV. I'll add that to the revision notes. Much appreciated.

PR|Jordan 11-21-2008 04:02 PM

top one

/morechars

RyanL 11-21-2008 04:10 PM

The first one which I see you're using below your name now and with the url all on one line.

My only suggestion would be to loose the drop shadow on the url. It's making it a bit hard to read.

$5 submissions 11-21-2008 04:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RyanL (Post 15088580)
The first one which I see you're using below your name now and with the url all on one line.

My only suggestion would be to loose the drop shadow on the url. It's making it a bit hard to read.

Thank you, Ryan. I'll add that to the revision list.

My current avatar hasn't yet incorporated most of the later revision suggestions on this thread. I should have those up for vote later on.

Thanks, guys and keep sending feedback.

NY Jester 11-21-2008 07:13 PM

on the grey background, definitely the top one. But all three could work, depending on the BG color/ And good call on reducing the font to fit one row for the URL


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