| Zaphieon |
10-06-2009 10:57 PM |
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Originally Posted by thundergasm
(Post 16402122)
The page does have the amateur feel to it which is good. The one thing I noticed on my laptop was the page seemed contrained...like the logo and such was squashed, making it appear a bit crowded. That's just my opinion of course. Personally I'd like to see the page a little wider.....just my
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could you explain this more bud.. not seeing the squashed issue you are saying.. or you just saying visuallly? or actually it looks distorted.
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Originally Posted by stoner529
(Post 16403056)
i dont like the "dear surfer". It isnt a necessity in the paragraph. a simple "welcome," would be better imo.
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That will actually be a text later on, and I think I will change that to welcome.. thank you for your input.
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Originally Posted by CYF
(Post 16403610)
:2 cents:
I like the graphics, looks like a nice amateur site.
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Thanks bud still working on it, but I think I will have it completed as far as the template and design finished in a week or so.
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Originally Posted by purecharlie
(Post 16403634)
Oh boy, where to start . . . ok, here's just a few things that jumped out straightaway . .
1. Why have you got an image viewer script on the home page? I don't see the logic in that and all it does is rrrrreeeeeeaaaaaaalllllllllyyyyyyyy slow down the page's load time. It took forever to load on my screen - if I had my dick in my hand I would have moved on long before it had loaded. Remove the image viewer script and replace it with simple links - if you click on the sample pic you go to a page with the bigger version - simple.
2. I hope this is almost a "Photoshop" design just so you can get the lay-out right, because if you are planning on using this for your final design you won't do well. The look of it is OK, but you can't just chop up the images and make your site. You need to have some targetted text on your page (and I mean TEXT - not words within a picture file as they don't count). The rule of thumb is if you can't highlight the text with your cursor then its probably contained within a picture file which means it's no longer viewable by search engines.
3. Where are the links? You say this is an initial design but links are a major part of any design - where you put them, what they look like, etc . .
4. Less space - once you have removed the image viewer script you can close up the pictures because I couldn't see the purpose of having massive spaces next to each set of images, it just looks messy and unprofessional - why should we scroll way down the page when we didn't need to (only because you decided to space the pictures out for no reason).
You have a long way to go on this my friend as it is nowhere near finished. Post back on here once you have an actual site to look at so we can all give some better feedback. :thumbsup
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1. It was loading slow earlier tonight due to the files being so large. each file was 3mb's it should be loading alot faster now. I was in the middle of working on that when you visited most likely.
2. Yes there will be text on the site soon. I do not plan on actually opening it to the public tell november 1st. It is in the very early stages of design still but the input on here is very helpful.
3. The Links will be up soon, I would say in the next day or so.
4. The image view script which is about 30kbs total is staying it was the large photos that was making it so slow.. next to the viewer I am putting up a video player, with a teaser video of each model. above each video player and image viewer, will be text talking about the model, and the site. Thats the reason the pictures are spaced out.
Thank you all for your input its very helpful |
