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Meeper 10-30-2009 09:29 AM

Trance Fans - New Track Inside
 
Just created a new track with a buddy of mine. Turned out pretty good IMO, would love to hear your thoughts / critique. :thumbsup



We created this track with nothing but a program called FL Studios.

Happy Halloween! :)

munki 10-30-2009 09:40 AM

Diggin it g

Anthony 10-30-2009 09:47 AM

Beginnning should have built up the layers slower instead of everything all at once.

Break beat at 1:24 should have been more pronounced, half a second at least and then blasted with your main layer/track

Nice addition of new layers around 3:05

I like the break beat around 3:40, I bet Vocals would work really well there.

Great sync with the break beats at 4:40

All in all, I like it! Great job!

Meeper 10-30-2009 09:51 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by munki (Post 16481785)
Diggin it g

Thanks dude!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Anthony (Post 16481826)
Beginnning should have built up the layers slower instead of everything all at once.

Break beat at 1:24 should have been more pronounced, half a second at least and then blasted with your main layer/track

Nice addition of new layers around 3:05

I like the break beat around 3:40, I bet Vocals would work really well there.

Great sync with the break beats at 4:40

All in all, I like it! Great job!

Thanks for the in depth review Anthony :thumbsup

TMM_Vlad 10-30-2009 10:01 AM

Sounds really good man, I like to change it up to trance once in a while. Let me know if you come out with more tracks. :)

C4W 10-30-2009 10:05 AM

Nice tune :)

Meeper 10-30-2009 10:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TMM_Vlad (Post 16481876)
Sounds really good man, I like to change it up to trance once in a while. Let me know if you come out with more tracks. :)

You got it dude!

Yo Adrian 10-30-2009 10:35 AM

Great track man, I really liked it!
Funny thing is I found myself following along with Anthony's tips to see what he meant lol

Meeper 10-30-2009 12:44 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Yo Adrian (Post 16482101)
Great track man, I really liked it!
Funny thing is I found myself following along with Anthony's tips to see what he meant lol

thanks bro! :)

nikki99 10-30-2009 01:03 PM

:GFYBand

LoveSandra 10-30-2009 01:20 PM

Nice tune...........

gandalfuy 10-30-2009 02:10 PM

Im not a big fan of trance, Im more into tchno and tech house, but thats sounds pretty good! :thumbsup

Twig 10-30-2009 02:45 PM

I liked it :thumbsup

Meeper 10-30-2009 04:17 PM

Thanks everyone. Its always a great feeling when people enjoy your tracks :)

GAMEFINEST 10-30-2009 04:54 PM

pretty bad ass

J. Falcon 10-30-2009 06:30 PM

sounds good

woj 10-30-2009 07:16 PM

that's good stuff dude :thumbsup

Scott McD 10-31-2009 05:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Meeper (Post 16481731)
Just created a new track with a buddy of mine. Turned out pretty good IMO, would love to hear your thoughts / critique. :thumbsup


I like it. Sure it could be cleaned up in a few places, but overall it's pretty good.

It does fade away too much at the 1:15 mark, but that's easily fixed.


It reminds of a hube club hit from a few years ago, which i am currently going insane about trying to remember the name. Once i get it, i will post the video on here, and let you hear how that goes. It's a similar beat, and it will show you how and when you should add and tweak sounds to the tune.

:thumbsup

Meeper 10-31-2009 09:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Scott McD (Post 16486651)
I like it. Sure it could be cleaned up in a few places, but overall it's pretty good.

It does fade away too much at the 1:15 mark, but that's easily fixed.


It reminds of a hube club hit from a few years ago, which i am currently going insane about trying to remember the name. Once i get it, i will post the video on here, and let you hear how that goes. It's a similar beat, and it will show you how and when you should add and tweak sounds to the tune.

:thumbsup

Awesome dude, definitely let me know when you figure out which tune it is, im very curious to hear it. :thumbsup

deserv 10-31-2009 09:48 AM

i like it alot, simple but very likeable! great job mate :)


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