Ok need ya opioions again on TOM's
 

please let me know if this is better
does it load any faster then yesterday, dose it look any better.

does anyone want a banenr spot

TOM

Loads fast for me. but dunno if its any better since this is the first time ive seen it.

haha thanks the main image logo was huge

no offense intended, but you cant tell if its loading faster?

tom are u shooting ur own content?

You should try aligning the text at the top to the left but keep it central and spliting it up more to make it easier to read.

Also there is a scroll bar at 800 x 600 cuased by the red Dick Bigger table.

You might want to give a little more thought to using Montel Williams' photo on the VA site..

It makes it look as though you're using him to promote the site, which might be an ugly thing if his people get wind of it.. IMO

Oh shit thanks ill get that fixed

as for shooting my own content yea been doing that, and
Alky no offense intended, but you cant tell if its loading faster? HUH

In my opinion porn surfers just want the porn.
Theres a lot of text at the top most surfers wont read it.
But thats just my opinion :)

Ok I did as you suggested I like it that away trhanks man :321GFY hit me up since ya helped me and shit ill give you two weeks free to promote a banner it will be rotated and i will set ya up with an account to check stats

TOM

Ye that text really aint for the surfers mate :) its for se's

good point :thumbsup but on my screen it still take up most of the space, depends if you want to attract bookmarkers or raw traffic???

what is your screen set at mate? Its small as shit on mine this is another reason I asked for ya alls help lmao

mines set to 1024 by 768.
Ill grab a screenshot of what I seen in a min

If you are trying to get some se traffic your keywords need more focus, for instance in your metas you have monica mendez but you don't have that in your title or body text.

In your title you have 'Free Soft to Hard to Wierd Sex' but thats not followed through in your metas, body, alt tags, H1 text, keyword.jpg etc.

Pick what phrases you would like to be found under carefully and then follow them throughout your page/site :2 cents:

Whats with all that wasted space at the bottom?

screenshot at http://www.bleet.net/screen.gif
thats with it maximised which I dont usually do.
To me it looks very textual ;)
hope it helps

dd2

argh I totaly forgot about that thanks dude ya wanna help with this? If so ill give you 2 months free banner space? LoL

It loads faster than yesterday, but the logo is still taking a couple of seconds to come up. Maybe its just my connection (usually runs about 1.5mbps), but you should be able to optimize/compress it a bit more given the fact its fairly uncomplicated and there are not alot of colors.

Your overall design looks great to me tho. Good luck with it!

yes it is :) thanks

Thanks dude :)

TOM

The logo can be compressed to be about 7-9k overall.
At the moment is sliced and a bit more than 9k, should speed it up a bit for 56kers

dd2

Tom.. I will try a couple banner spots

hey thanks I redid the banner again to me it lokos to compressed , PerfectionGirls email me [email protected]