Eminem ain't got shit on me...
 

My take on this business.

My deliverance sentences all of you with no resistance
Gettin lifted from the prescence of my lyrical existence
Livin' in a twisted image, sleepin deep within your vision
Situations gettin' thin and this is just the begining.
So sit back and pay attention to this lesson I'm presentin'
Let your mind attract the facts and react with pro precision
What you need to do is listen, picture me in my position
Get your differences fixed, quit contradicting your decisions.

A proposition fo' niggas that's sellin' bitches fo' figgas
If it's the only way to get it, and you want it, go get it
As a witness to po' pimpin', gettin' womens a business
And all the bitches in the shit is in top physical fitness
The shit is wild nigga, so take this shit in progression
Go get some fits that fit these bitches that be in your possession
Don't be stressin' on this lesson, get your hoes to invest in
Some clothes for hoes that only go with a selective collection

Contemplate on gettin' paper, cause theres paper to get and
Playa hatas hatin' playas and the pussy they pimpin'
This shit is gettin' kind of sick, and I ain't takin it pimp
The only hoes I grow to know are those with money to spend
So if you want in, get in, we'll split the dividends
If it ever comes to an end I'll leave no evidence
Remember it's the money, my honeys, that's what I represent
I put you up on game trick ass niggas but your hesitant

Fuck it...

4 bar pass:

Yo, yo, you call me a nigga and say you is hesitant?
Shit, you ain't bigger, we don't need no fucking measurement
All your bitch/money/shit/ triggers something big in me - an elephant
I'd slap yo' with my trunk, wigger, but i ain't that fucking arrogant

Haha, not bad. Maybe we can get some battles going on in here? :pimp

Eh... Typical Eminem. Pretty good song though.

I have been writing a rap song for a couple months now about this business and the haters. It needs a bit more work but when I get time to finish it I will post it up. I have 3 versus done and the hook. Just need to finish it all up and make it a hit.

Verse #1

Here is my story, It’s a fearful journey through out the last 10 years. That’s a decade for the cheerful circus clowns slow at switching gears. I Started out in porn a poor pretty cam model with lots of fears. I was shy I was broke I didn’t give a fuck. I shredded some tears along the way but I never gave up. I did what I did just to make a buck. Not a deer but some dollars is what I’m getting at. This rap is fast don’t let it hold you down, it has multiple meanings, so just sit right back. Don’t Buckle, your seat belt on this ride cause it’s going fast, it’s a story of myself, my bizz, my life my cash and all the mischievous folks. Try and keep up while I spit at you, this is no joke. Some call me wonder women while I’m in demand, I’m like Lebron, D-Wade and Bosh with a master plan. I speak my mind all the time cause I know I can. While your scamming customers I’m out on my island beach working on my tan. Weak ass companies listen to this advice as it’s free. You will hear it on the radio on the boards like gfy and on TV. I will end verse 1 with this simple line. Stop the scamming the carding and adult from dying.

what the fucking hell is going on in here ... :uhoh ... :disgust

Pretty cool Zuzana. I like the ending of the verse.

:1orglaugh:1orglaugh

Thanks :thumbsup

Verse #2

This is my business stop the hating and the selfish acts. Stop running your mouth off at the lips until you know the facts. You run your mouth like a faucet, your running out of water, I?ll turn this fucking place into a desert in short order. You?re not a client, customer, or someone that I care about, but just some basement kid, that wishes he had the dedication, drive, devotion and dollars that I did. You try and talk down to me and act like you?re mister macho man, but in the end I?m the hot ass chick with all the cash in my hand. You fucking weirdo?s should send me all your hard earned dough. Oh wait a minute you don?t have any bread cause you got to know, you ate it all up, your super fat and stupid lazy can?t get off the couch?.. Ouch did I just say that? I?m a super Bitch in love with the dick. Sometimes I rhyme slow sometime I rhyme quick. I burned my cake building my design empire, so at 35 I can sit back and fucking retire. I will end verse 2 with another well known fact, it?s not the tubes that destroyed adult we all know that. It?s the evil trolls that never got a fucking degree, that?s why they have no idea how to run a bizz with honesty. Here we go to the hook it?s phenomenal. Listen to the words they are golden and hysterical.

Haha, that's great!

Old skool! Just rhyming the last word! Brilliantly retro!

Thanks. I will be singing the hook when it gets recorded. It's going to be fun :thumbsup

feminist women love eminem.
slim shady? I'm sick of him

You can't touch eminem, you ain't got shit on him

:walks on stage:
:looks around:
"Fuck you, bitches."
: Drops mic and walks out:

/thread.

When are you recording?! Hope its soon I would love to hear this.

I'm not sure. I have to find time to get to a studio and still looking for the right beat and bass tracks. Hopefully by the end of the year.

That's awesome :thumbsup

"Better call the fire department I've hired a arson to set fire to carpet and burn up your entire apartment", insane. Tip: never compare yourself to Eminem lol.

yalll wanna be rappersz..

oh man....

Some nice lyrics and rimes in here :)

I don't want to be a rapperz I am a rapperz :winkwink:

Thanks. :thumbsup

hahah yo, let me spit some shit:

OK - I've had it guys, listen.
I'ma mess your brains up with my lyrical wisdom
Steadily crafting words with deep impact, reaching galaxies BEYOND your vision (WHAT?)
Like meteorites I fall upon your styles, creating a collision with tactical precision
Cuz I'm on a mission - disassemble ANY fake nigga in this business with no ambition (wooord)
Part-timers acting like big shots... Newsflash: talking smack will not get your dick sucked.
You think you're onto something. You in the game for big bucks... Really?
In reality you get fist fucked violently like Clara-G in Fist Flush. Don't try to play me.

* BRAP BRAP *

You wondering why you can't make it? The truth is you lazy .
Your business skills are non existent, like Big-D. Yet you talk like you're big hahaha?
Coming up hard; thinking you can live life, fully free?
Your soul is destined to be a slave of society. Get back to flipping burgers, maybe?
The sheer amount of stupidity flowing through your brains never ceases to amazes me.
Now listen to your momma and get a degree.

* gun clappin *

Betta check yourself before you wreck yourself. Nigga whattt

Which song of his is this from???

Good track, never heard that before... I have his first 2 cd's :thumbsup

Alrighty then...

Haha, I wrote that silly.

Haha, cool. :thumbsup

hahah, thanks. you and Zuzana rocked it harder though :pimp

:thumbsup:thumbsup:thumbsup

Hook that I will sing when I get to the studio -

Started off as a small fish in a big (net) pond
Felt so helpless and so all alone
Feeling like a little girl in porn’s chauvinist world
It only pushed me harder

All these players falling at my side
Where all your bros at pumping up your pride
Looks like the little fish turned out to be the hottest shit
Zuzana Designs busting rhymes, brings you the hottest hits

I love the nigga whattt and (wooord) haha. the * gun clappin * was pretty sweet too.

Thanks Sarah! It just wasn't complete without the gun clappin.

I always wanted to make a track. Maybe just one, to prove to myself I am capable of doing it and to unleash my anger. I have to expand my vocabulary and become a lyrical genius first though, so it will take a few years at least before I can get started :1orglaugh

Make sure to send over the song to me when you're done. I want to be one of the first to hear it! Love what you're doing :thumbsup

Thanks J, with all the skills stinkypink, you and myself have we should collaborate and make a sweet track to go on my upcoming album. It will be a few years until I have the time to get it all together. I knew this rapper in Raleigh named The Future several years ago. He was ok but I was a better writer than him. He got himself in trouble with the law and got locked up. I will be sure to shoot you a copy of the song and video when it's all done :thumbsup

Sweet lemonade! That would be cool, would love to hear it. Adobe Audition is good for making tracks and you can find beats on soundclick.com Good Luck.

lol @ Sweet lemonade. I have used Adobe and seen soundclick.com. I will have to sign up when I get time and look around a little more. Thanks for the link :thumbsup

I have lots more to write for the song to be anywhere ready for recording though. I will keep you posted :winkwink:

I have verse #3 done and I'm almost done with verse #4. I have to clean it all up after that and get in the studio to record this hit.

You are just shitting words.

This is by far the best thread on GFY right now.

you're just a hater yo