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faysjoint · 11-29-2013, 06:49 AM

Can someone please review my website?

It's a gallery of black and white vintage erotica, still being updated with content.

faysjoint.com

Muchos gracias!

faysjoint · 12-08-2013, 11:57 PM

Anyone?

JesseQuinn · 12-09-2013, 01:28 AM

I really like the design, it matches the style of the content perfectly.

I'd definitely add more content. I like the videos you've added since you first posted the thread, as the photos alone made the site feel a bit sparse. It's a trip how much the 'ideal' female body (let alone tech advances) have changed over the decades, and your site is pretty thought-provoking on that tip. To that end I'd suggest adding dates into the content descriptions (eg: late 20's, early 40's) but that's just a personal preference.

Vintage porn isn't my thing but your site is compelling and really well put together. I like it a lot.

Tdash · 12-09-2013, 06:38 AM

Looks good but needs more content.

Andreweb · 12-09-2013, 07:02 AM

I love it is very nice the design is matching with the pictures, you'll need more content but I understand you are only at the begin!
Good luck

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mrpornoporn · 12-09-2013, 08:40 AM

Looks like very special to me. Special niche. But looks nice, and different from so many other site themes.

longpig · 12-09-2013, 09:39 AM

Looks good to me, I agree the design suits the pics. Perhaps you could have a bit more opinion in your descriptions rather than just saying what's going on. Or do you have any source info for the pics, who they were / why they were posing etc? This could be interesting.

Otherwise, yeah, more content (:

postalsex · 12-09-2013, 07:03 PM

add more content

faysjoint · 12-10-2013, 04:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JesseQuinn

I really like the design, it matches the style of the content perfectly.

I'd definitely add more content. I like the videos you've added since you first posted the thread, as the photos alone made the site feel a bit sparse. It's a trip how much the 'ideal' female body (let alone tech advances) have changed over the decades, and your site is pretty thought-provoking on that tip. To that end I'd suggest adding dates into the content descriptions (eg: late 20's, early 40's) but that's just a personal preference.

Vintage porn isn't my thing but your site is compelling and really well put together. I like it a lot.

I made some slight adjustments to the design, and added some new content.

Existing featurettes now have a decade, but most of the photos I have on the site are currently dateless / without a proper source, so I added comments from IntenseDebate.com, if someone wants to suggest a decade to be used.

Your opinion is very much appreciated!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tdash

Looks good but needs more content.

I was focusing more on the overall design and functionality, but I added some new content.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Andreweb

I love it is very nice the design is matching with the pictures, you'll need more content but I understand you are only at the begin!
Good luck

!

Thank you!

Quote:

Originally Posted by mrpornoporn

Looks like very special to me. Special niche. But looks nice, and different from so many other site themes.

Thank you, very much.

Quote:

Originally Posted by longpig

Looks good to me, I agree the design suits the pics. Perhaps you could have a bit more opinion in your descriptions rather than just saying what's going on. Or do you have any source info for the pics, who they were / why they were posing etc? This could be interesting.

Otherwise, yeah, more content (:

No source info for majority of the photos, they were mostly released under pseudonyms.

Updating the posts with better descriptions will not be an issue.

Thanks!

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Originally Posted by postalsex

add more content

Will do, thanks!

cryssy · 12-10-2013, 05:43 AM

good job

existenz · 12-14-2013, 02:47 AM

cool, a vintage theme, very unique. saw a similar one with all the playboy centerfolds, almost in the same style. nice ideea man, congrats, i think all u need at the moment is content content content

faysjoint · 12-14-2013, 07:39 AM

That's the least of the problem, I will be adding more content shortly.

Do you remember its name or link?

Thanks

pinkz · 12-14-2013, 08:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JesseQuinn

I really like the design, it matches the style of the content perfectly.

I'd definitely add more content. I like the videos you've added since you first posted the thread, as the photos alone made the site feel a bit sparse. It's a trip how much the 'ideal' female body (let alone tech advances) have changed over the decades, and your site is pretty thought-provoking on that tip. To that end I'd suggest adding dates into the content descriptions (eg: late 20's, early 40's) but that's just a personal preference.

Vintage porn isn't my thing but your site is compelling and really well put together. I like it a lot.

what she said

rebloged a pic to tumblr for a lil link juice 4 you

faysjoint · 12-16-2013, 09:37 AM

Thanks, new content has been added.

sciweb · 12-16-2013, 08:50 PM

Not sure what specifically you would like to be reviewed but looks really cool

KburliK · 12-17-2013, 09:50 AM

Wow, i found my grandma on your site

x.unlimited · 12-18-2013, 02:46 PM

It looks very nice, but there is still much more you can do to improve the SEO of your site!

VinceRuth · 12-18-2013, 03:01 PM

your site looks nice,but add more content .good luck

adultchatpay · 12-22-2013, 03:39 PM

Looks good to me, i am sure there is so much more room for improvement.

L365 · 12-22-2013, 11:07 PM

Hi,

Looks great.

Few minor things.

If I were you, I would:

1. Add an "About" link in the top nav to provide info about your site.

...instead of text in footer...
"What's Fay's Joint All About
To find and archive black & white erotica from the early 1900s up until the late 1950s."

2. Get rid of
"Built with: ProcessWire ~ Bootstrap ~ jQuery ~ MediaElement.js ~ Glyphicons" in the footer.

Cheers

incredibleworkethic · 12-22-2013, 11:29 PM

I like it for what it is. I was confused as to why I was there though. I loaded the site up and thought, what am I doing here? I think initial impression might cause people to stray away.

I do like it for what it is though. I knew better to click around and browse through your posts because I'm in the business too. But gut feeling the average user might be confused with what you site offers on the first impression.

This is just my opinion since you asked.

swfantasies · 12-24-2013, 12:49 PM

Personally, I'm a fan of vintage porn. I have bookmarked your site and I will be checking it out often! Thanks!

faysjoint · 01-03-2014, 11:45 AM

Thank you all for your fine comments!

Quote:

Originally Posted by incredibleworkethic

I like it for what it is. I was confused as to why I was there though. I loaded the site up and thought, what am I doing here? I think initial impression might cause people to stray away.

I do like it for what it is though. I knew better to click around and browse through your posts because I'm in the business too. But gut feeling the average user might be confused with what you site offers on the first impression.

This is just my opinion since you asked.

I made a new homepage, is it any better?

Maqua · 01-03-2014, 11:53 AM

Unique

I like it

armysmoke · 01-03-2014, 03:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by faysjoint

Thank you all for your fine comments!

I made a new homepage, is it any better?

I like your site. It's unique. You need to add a lot more content. I think this site will do extremely well!

Best of luck in 2014.

anthonyb5615 · 01-05-2014, 11:59 PM

Looks good, maybe you could add a story to some of the pictures, more details. Something to keep people coming back to your site and staying there longer. The pictures are great.

xpimp · 01-06-2014, 03:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by anthonyb5615

Looks good, maybe you could add a story to some of the pictures, more details. Something to keep people coming back to your site and staying there longer. The pictures are great.

yes, a good story to every picture and clip should help allot, even if this task will be some time consuming

nitrofein · 01-06-2014, 09:47 AM

I would like to see categories and some type of photo set so that there is more of a point to clicking on the images. I feel like it would be more of an experience to discover more images with each click along with an enlarged version of what I was clicking on.

Overall a very nice beginning to a site!

VinceRuth · 01-06-2014, 03:05 PM

Add more content

tonyantone · 01-09-2014, 03:00 PM

Golden Days of Erotica site has possibities but guess what I am going to say?

ADD MORE CONTENT!

keep up the good work!

11-29-2013, 06:49 AM	#1
faysjoint Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 36	Please review my website! - FaysJoint.com Can someone please review my website? It's a gallery of black and white vintage erotica, still being updated with content. faysjoint.com Muchos gracias!

12-09-2013, 01:28 AM	#3
JesseQuinn feeding the wolves Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2012 Location: between sand and stars in Jamaica Posts: 6,223	I really like the design, it matches the style of the content perfectly. I'd definitely add more content. I like the videos you've added since you first posted the thread, as the photos alone made the site feel a bit sparse. It's a trip how much the 'ideal' female body (let alone tech advances) have changed over the decades, and your site is pretty thought-provoking on that tip. To that end I'd suggest adding dates into the content descriptions (eg: late 20's, early 40's) but that's just a personal preference. Vintage porn isn't my thing but your site is compelling and really well put together. I like it a lot. __________________ throwing molotav cocktails at the precinct

12-09-2013, 07:02 AM	#5
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12-09-2013, 09:39 AM	#7
longpig Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 41	Looks good to me, I agree the design suits the pics. Perhaps you could have a bit more opinion in your descriptions rather than just saying what's going on. Or do you have any source info for the pics, who they were / why they were posing etc? This could be interesting. Otherwise, yeah, more content (: __________________ SEO for Porn - A Beginner's Guide Arvixe - The Best Adult Hosting

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12-08-2013, 11:57 PM	#2
faysjoint Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 36	Anyone?

12-09-2013, 06:38 AM	#4
Tdash Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 683	Looks good but needs more content.

12-09-2013, 08:40 AM	#6
mrpornoporn Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 52	Looks like very special to me. Special niche. But looks nice, and different from so many other site themes.

12-09-2013, 07:03 PM	#8
postalsex Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2013 Posts: 400	add more content

12-10-2013, 05:43 AM	#10
cryssy Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 29	good job

12-14-2013, 02:47 AM	#11
existenz Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 31	cool, a vintage theme, very unique. saw a similar one with all the playboy centerfolds, almost in the same style. nice ideea man, congrats, i think all u need at the moment is content content content

12-14-2013, 07:39 AM	#12
faysjoint Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 36	That's the least of the problem, I will be adding more content shortly. Do you remember its name or link? Thanks

12-16-2013, 09:37 AM	#14
faysjoint Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 36	Thanks, new content has been added.

12-17-2013, 09:50 AM	#16
KburliK Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2013 Location: Europe Posts: 9	Wow, i found my grandma on your site

12-18-2013, 02:46 PM	#17
x.unlimited Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2011 Posts: 25	It looks very nice, but there is still much more you can do to improve the SEO of your site!

12-18-2013, 03:01 PM	#18
VinceRuth Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2013 Posts: 789	your site looks nice,but add more content .good luck __________________ Sex Xxx Free Porn Pictures Free

12-22-2013, 03:39 PM	#19
adultchatpay Let's Make Money Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 8,784	Looks good to me, i am sure there is so much more room for improvement.

12-22-2013, 11:07 PM	#20
L365 Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 7	Hi, Looks great. Few minor things. If I were you, I would: 1. Add an "About" link in the top nav to provide info about your site. ...instead of text in footer... "What's Fay's Joint All About To find and archive black & white erotica from the early 1900s up until the late 1950s." 2. Get rid of "Built with: ProcessWire ~ Bootstrap ~ jQuery ~ MediaElement.js ~ Glyphicons" in the footer. Cheers

12-22-2013, 11:29 PM	#21
incredibleworkethic Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 2,302	I like it for what it is. I was confused as to why I was there though. I loaded the site up and thought, what am I doing here? I think initial impression might cause people to stray away. I do like it for what it is though. I knew better to click around and browse through your posts because I'm in the business too. But gut feeling the average user might be confused with what you site offers on the first impression. This is just my opinion since you asked.

12-24-2013, 12:49 PM	#22
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01-05-2014, 11:59 PM	#26
anthonyb5615 Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Pennsylvania Posts: 130	Looks good, maybe you could add a story to some of the pictures, more details. Something to keep people coming back to your site and staying there longer. The pictures are great.

01-06-2014, 09:47 AM	#28
nitrofein Registered User Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 12	I would like to see categories and some type of photo set so that there is more of a point to clicking on the images. I feel like it would be more of an experience to discover more images with each click along with an enlarged version of what I was clicking on. Overall a very nice beginning to a site!

01-06-2014, 03:05 PM	#29
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01-09-2014, 03:00 PM	#30
tonyantone Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Apr 2012 Posts: 284	Has possibities Golden Days of Erotica site has possibities but guess what I am going to say? ADD MORE CONTENT! keep up the good work!