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spacedog69 · 03-19-2003, 01:53 PM

I am new to the adult industry. I am currently working on 3 designs. I would love any expert advice to what is working and what is not with my designs so far.

See designs at www.ctobin.com/adult

Thanks

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neewwman · 03-20-2003, 10:26 PM

I thought "Dick Diary" was a great design. Very creative, different, makes you want to click the "enter" link (if you want to see dicks). The magnifying glass was a neat trick, the book motif is cool.

The other gay design was less successful. I can't tell if it's supposed to be "boy throb" or "throb boy." If this is the first page of a web site, it needs some kind of navigation links.

Girls gone fishing seems a bit cluttered to me.

Over all, based on the first one, I'd say you have a future!

03-19-2003, 01:53 PM	#1
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03-20-2003, 10:09 AM	#2
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03-20-2003, 10:26 PM	#3
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