Please critique my amateur paysite - GoFuckYourself.com

Xxaru Media · 10-19-2009, 10:41 AM

I just started this amateur site. It's my very first paysite ever, so I'm definitely not an expert here. I really just wanted to get some feedback to try and see what I have going right and what I need to improve upon. All comments are appreciated. The link is http://xxaru.com

jackbdirty · 10-19-2009, 12:45 PM

I think it looks pretty good! Great preview, etc. You should have no problem selling memberships as long as you are marketing it

signbucks · 10-19-2009, 02:12 PM

looks pretty nice, though ccbill would be much better

AIbenjamink · 10-19-2009, 02:31 PM

Looks nice, although it does not look like your member area is secured...

Xxaru Media · 10-19-2009, 02:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by signbucks

looks pretty nice, though ccbill would be much better

Yeah, I may be switching over to them if zombaio doesn't get their affiliate program together soon.

Quote:

Originally Posted by AIbenjamink

Looks nice, although it does not look like your member area is secured...

That's being handled

Chosen · 10-19-2009, 02:47 PM

Looks ok...

livecarlo · 10-19-2009, 05:09 PM

You need better Search Engine Optimization (SEO). You only have a META title and no description or keywords. You might want to think about changing "Home of the hottest russian pussy on the net" to something more unique. Maybe something about your quest to be king of Russian smut or My All-Exclusive Russian Hardcore FuckFest. Might want to put your new content update schedule somewhere, like on the join page.

Xxaru Media · 10-19-2009, 06:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by livecarlo

You need better Search Engine Optimization (SEO). You only have a META title and no description or keywords. You might want to think about changing "Home of the hottest russian pussy on the net" to something more unique. Maybe something about your quest to be king of Russian smut or My All-Exclusive Russian Hardcore FuckFest. Might want to put your new content update schedule somewhere, like on the join page.

Thanks, those are some good suggestions. I will definitely work on fixing those. I was thinking of changing that tagline up top anyways.

seenoneseen'emall · 10-19-2009, 08:20 PM

like the site, it is clean, easy to navigate and to understand. but you do need to secure your members area. I can click it on and get any of your content for free. Pretty much watched all of it.

purecharlie · 10-19-2009, 08:48 PM

I think it looks a nice site so well done if this is your first paysite. I would agree with earlier comments that you need to get your affiliate program sorted out and links to the program at the foot of all tour pages (rather than just an e-mail address).
You may also want to consider offering different pricing options - at the moment you only offer $23.95 / 30 days recurring. You may also want to offer a non-recurring 30 day option at a slightly higher price, as well as a 90 day non-recurring option at a slightly discounted price than if they paid monthly.
But overall, well done!

Xxaru Media · 10-19-2009, 10:18 PM

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Originally Posted by seenoneseen'emall

like the site, it is clean, easy to navigate and to understand. but you do need to secure your members area. I can click it on and get any of your content for free. Pretty much watched all of it.

Shit! Something got fucked up when I switched servers. Had no idea the whole password system got obliterated. Will fix that ASAP

4pleasure · 10-20-2009, 05:04 AM

Looks good enough

fatfoo · 10-21-2009, 08:06 PM

Russian pussy... Design looks good, Xxaru Media.

Porko · 10-22-2009, 09:08 AM

you need to remake the home design. good content..
looks so 2001...try to find new ideas

Tease4Cash · 10-26-2009, 06:21 AM

I would change the design if i were you, i would add pay-per-clip option and i would take off the quest to become a porn star.. makes you look a newbie and this is NOT what you want customers and affiliates to think. Hot chicks... I'd bang them all

theS2O · 10-26-2009, 07:13 PM

the chicks are hot. about the layout. looks good but still, you can improve it.

Tanker · 10-27-2009, 11:53 AM

I would promote it as well if it was on CCBill! I don't really mess with Zambio sites.

Xer0 · 11-08-2009, 11:31 AM

Good content - the models are hot but the template design needs work.

Xxaru Media · 11-09-2009, 09:21 AM

Thanks for the tips peoples

. I will be changing some things, and adding ccbill as well.

James not Bond · 11-11-2009, 05:02 AM

For your first site it looks great, who designed it?

Xxaru Media · 11-11-2009, 03:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by James not Bond

For your first site it looks great, who designed it?

Me, myself, and I. It's a work in progress

MrDeiz · 11-12-2009, 02:29 AM

just wondering.
do people join your zombaio program?

Xxaru Media · 11-12-2009, 08:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by daizzzy

just wondering.
do people join your zombaio program?

A few, but I'm in the process of switching to CCbill as we speak. Just waiting on them to get my account set up.

teresa · 11-12-2009, 08:57 PM

Looks pretty good for a first attempt at a paysite.

roxxx · 11-19-2009, 03:19 PM

Looks good. Good like with it!

brassmonkey · 11-28-2009, 04:34 PM

look good 2 me

HomerSimpson · 11-28-2009, 06:00 PM

well you said critique so I'll do so:

- first gray color sucks, this is not biz site it's porn site! Get rid of that metallic look!
- chick in header on the right has fucking ugly tits/nipples!
- try to avoid times new roman font (default one) on a porn site - looks to amateur, at least use Arial on whole site and you can't go wrong with it

this should be enough... for the start...

Bhunter · 11-29-2009, 01:37 PM

it's not catchy IMO.

10-19-2009, 10:41 AM	#1
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10-19-2009, 12:45 PM	#2
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10-19-2009, 02:12 PM	#3
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10-19-2009, 08:48 PM	#10
purecharlie Confirmed User Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 622	I think it looks a nice site so well done if this is your first paysite. I would agree with earlier comments that you need to get your affiliate program sorted out and links to the program at the foot of all tour pages (rather than just an e-mail address). You may also want to consider offering different pricing options - at the moment you only offer $23.95 / 30 days recurring. You may also want to offer a non-recurring 30 day option at a slightly higher price, as well as a 90 day non-recurring option at a slightly discounted price than if they paid monthly. But overall, well done! __________________ www.purecfnm.com \| www.ladyvoyeurs.com \| www.amateurcfnm.com www.girlsabuseguys.com \| www.heylittledick.com Amazing ratios from the biggest CFNM Network in the world! Follow us on Twitter @purecfnm

10-19-2009, 02:47 PM	#6
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10-19-2009, 05:09 PM	#7
livecarlo Confirmed User Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: // ICQ 560-024-256 Posts: 123	You need better Search Engine Optimization (SEO). You only have a META title and no description or keywords. You might want to think about changing "Home of the hottest russian pussy on the net" to something more unique. Maybe something about your quest to be king of Russian smut or My All-Exclusive Russian Hardcore FuckFest. Might want to put your new content update schedule somewhere, like on the join page.

10-19-2009, 08:20 PM	#9
seenoneseen'emall Registered User Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 32	like the site, it is clean, easy to navigate and to understand. but you do need to secure your members area. I can click it on and get any of your content for free. Pretty much watched all of it.

10-20-2009, 05:04 AM	#12
4pleasure Confirmed User Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 303	Looks good enough

10-21-2009, 08:06 PM	#13
fatfoo ICQ:649699063 Industry Role: Join Date: Mar 2003 Posts: 27,763	Russian pussy... Design looks good, Xxaru Media. __________________ Send me an email: [email protected]

10-22-2009, 09:08 AM	#14
Porko SeeMyBucks.com Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: USA Posts: 4,014	you need to remake the home design. good content.. looks so 2001...try to find new ideas __________________

10-26-2009, 06:21 AM	#15
Tease4Cash Registered User Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 52	I would change the design if i were you, i would add pay-per-clip option and i would take off the quest to become a porn star.. makes you look a newbie and this is NOT what you want customers and affiliates to think. Hot chicks... I'd bang them all __________________ Webmaster of www.KellyAustin.com Tease 4 Cash Affiliate Program www.Tease4Cash.com

10-26-2009, 07:13 PM	#16
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10-27-2009, 11:53 AM	#17
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11-08-2009, 11:31 AM	#18
Xer0 Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: The World Posts: 251	Good content - the models are hot but the template design needs work.

11-09-2009, 09:21 AM	#19
Xxaru Media Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: MIA Posts: 255	Thanks for the tips peoples . I will be changing some things, and adding ccbill as well. __________________ ICQ: 392432948 Need A Hosting Provider - Click Here

11-11-2009, 05:02 AM	#20
James not Bond Registered User Join Date: May 2008 Location: Midlands UK Posts: 31	For your first site it looks great, who designed it?

11-12-2009, 02:29 AM	#22
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11-12-2009, 08:57 PM	#24
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11-19-2009, 03:19 PM	#25
roxxx Confirmed User Join Date: Jun 2008 Posts: 392	Looks good. Good like with it!

11-28-2009, 04:34 PM	#26
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11-28-2009, 06:00 PM	#27
HomerSimpson Too lazy to set a custom title Industry Role: Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Springfield Posts: 13,826	well you said critique so I'll do so: - first gray color sucks, this is not biz site it's porn site! Get rid of that metallic look! - chick in header on the right has fucking ugly tits/nipples! - try to avoid times new roman font (default one) on a porn site - looks to amateur, at least use Arial on whole site and you can't go wrong with it this should be enough... for the start... __________________ Make a bank with Chaturbate - the best selling webcam program Ads that can't be block with AdBlockers !!! /// Best paying popup program (Bitcoin payouts) !!! PHP, MySql, Smarty, CodeIgniter, Laravel, WordPress, NATS... fixing stuff, server migrations & optimizations... My ICQ: 27429884 \| Email:

11-29-2009, 01:37 PM	#28
Bhunter Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Amsterdam Posts: 1,119	it's not catchy IMO.