Neriah,

It is no disrespect to your current designer, but I do agree you should start again. Take a look at the portfolios and prices of the designers below.
The added expense is worth it in better conversion rates.


Designers
www.aaaadultdesign.com
www.webinc.com
www.bluedesignstudio.com
www.dickmansdesign.com
www.WyldeSites.com


uhmmm... ps. cinquante!

AMP we haven't ever agreed on much but i'm going to agree with you on this one bro

BTW do you need any "Streaming" applications if so check sig :winkwink:

I agree.

Neriah this is good advice, while AMP is not the best designer out there, he is very good and getting better and he definitely knows his stuff. I am really impressed he would take the time to give you some pointers ! :thumbsup

Thanks Mike!

Neriah: We'd be happy to rebuild your tour, check out our portfolio: http://www.bluedesignstudios.com and send me an email if you like what you see :)

Okay, I appreciate your candor!
This is my 4th tour this year...struggling with it....I will probably be in touch with some of you very soon.
Like I said, I do appreciate your honest advice. That is the only way to get a better product out there and make us all more $$!!:)

you go girl...you're HOT! Would be nice to see a little more than just free head shots...people need to be enticed to pay.

:1orglaugh :1orglaugh :1orglaugh

I was thinking the same thing. Who the fuck does he think he is offering advice? BWAHAHAHAHAHAAAA. Maybe if he pulled his head out of his ass long enough, he might be able to learn a few things about design.

Looks nice just needs better design and better flow.

I have to agree with AMP on this one...Too much to fix start over with one of the recommended design firms:thumbsup

Gday all

I think some of you are being waaaaay to critical of this tour IMO.

I have over 450 front ends, and some of the most bullshit damn awful ones convert like the bejesus

And with sites we spent days in developing, conversion suck like a 2 bit whore

The question is "how can you get more traffic across your site, and worry less about the design aspects".

Too many people these days get hung up on design, and never get their product out there

One of the biggest names in the industry tought me that lesson, when I spent tens of thousands of $$$ and months of work designing Adults.com. At the end of the day, all that mattered was traffic, and not the design.

Another good lesson is Sex.com

Sex.com is a mighty site on a mighty URL designed to do mighty things. But people keep telling me it made more money when it was a banner farm under Cohens skullduggery

Concentrate on what you do best. Get webmasters to see you have the right product, and get them to give you their traffic. Turn on your charms babe ;-)

An old lesson from an old dog downunder

PS - Hank old mate, I cant wait to have a Jack Daniels or 15 with ya in Vancouver next week :drinkup

throwing more traffic at something that's broken is not a solution. It's a bandaid. Neither does "turning on the charm" and seducing webmasters to push it take the place of good form.
She asked for a critique and she got it. "Bullshit awful" tours (as you put it) have their place, but a Playmate's site is not it. Certain things need to be presented in certain ways. You wouldn't advertise the Sunday Monster Truck Rally in the style of a feminine hygiene product spot and then argue that it just needs more viewers to be successful would you? Of course not.

AMp

your image is cut out isnt very nice, it could use some touching up

icq me if u need any help with the design :)

right on:thumbsup

i'm not reading all this crap ICQ me if you want a real opinion

1622420

Amp, I have to agree with you...I only want to really promote this once it is done right. I want to feel proud of my product.
I don't want to blow my chance with the webmaster's traffic. This new tour is actually converting way better than the last, but it's still not enough! What do you think about a contest here? Some cash, sweet prizes, etc. I know you won't refer me to anyone, but what do you think about that idea?

1. What a babe

2. Who did those cutouts? Reminds me of a Brad Shaw site!

Cheap shot. Our sites are all designed by the leading designers in the business. I guess there are still people who like porn star content, look at vivid.

ya

looks good :)

great!http://www.addis-welt.de/smilie/smil...-thumb_SML.gif

I think I just said that:Graucho

I need a pass to the members area, then I can give you further advice..:)

It's not really her. It's SLY from GFY -- same ICQ#

<img src="http://www.pottyguard.com/assets/images/hands.jpg">

:1orglaugh :thumbsup

Sorry babe...you are wrong! Sly's ICQ # is 190099545
mine is # 190667858

But nice try sweetie!:1orglaugh

Hey, I am open to options! ICQ me 190667858

I'm sorry - but I have a hard time believing you're really Neriah Davis.

I think that if you are indeed Neriah you should post a pic of yourself proving such - holding a piece of paper with a marker that says 'GFY' on it or 'fuck you sleazydream'

I'm not talking nude or anything nauthty, just something to prove you are indeed who you say you are.

otherwise you're just some jackassed lame assed webmaster with a licence to promote Neriah's pics fucking with everyone here on GFY.

untill you post proof, as far as I'm concerned you're a FAKER.

I could tell you what to do to enhance your tour page, but all that sticks out in my narcotic coated memory is your sexi bodi half naked and being adorable. sorry to shower you with more compliments, but you should thank god you can live off your beauty... If I met you in real life I'd be speachless and probably have a panic attack, nice work :thumbsup

Okay Mr. Smarty Pants....I mean Sleazy Dream!
http://www.neriah.com/customer_extra...boards/gfy.jpg
p.s. it's all love! LOL

I'm a believer.

Thank you

don't h8 on her!
masturb8 on her!

EXACTLY! EXACTLY! EXACTLY!

Designs are just that designs. Nothing more.

If there is one thing I've learned in all my 20 years in the adult biz is the guys are buying the "turn on" connection they feel with the girl(s) whose images they see.

It doesn't matter what the setting is or any other design bs. If they fall in love with that girl the credit card is coming out.

Neriah, its all about you. They are buying YOU! The look in your eyes, the sensuality and sexuality radiating from your body and soul is what is closing the sale, nothing else.

They are buying because they want to see more pics of you. They could care less what the fucking graphics and buttons and surrounding color schemes look like on your site.

Place the focus on nailing that 1-on-1 connection with your potential customers. That's what will increase sales.

:thumbsup

Wow!
Some good vibes at GFY! I never dreamed! LOL
Thanks guys, I appreciate the support:thumbsup

I also appreciate the criticism. We never grow if we aren't challenged. I am seriously considering a design contest though. Truth is, I need a revamp and soon! Look for a contest in the VERY near future! I'll be over here brewing up a sweet prize!

:winkwink: :winkwink:

EvilDan,

see you next week for 15 JD's:glugglug

Sleazy, your starting to sound like Brad Shaw:Graucho

Ms. Davis, listen to advise and FIX THE FUCKIN TOUR!!!

No matter how beautiful you are IT SUCKS:mad:

Neriah - Leave the tour - go for the business. You already said you have had 4 goes at it. The designers of this world will never be happy with any design - Ever!

KRL - Thanks mate - well said

Hank - It will be a pleasure to drink copious amounts of JD with ya mate. And for the record, I think parts of your site sucks, but how can you or anybody else argue with the highest celebrity conversions on the planet? MrSkin.com rocks for all the right reasons - content!

Neriah,

Not sure if you any of these already, but here are some enhanced features "marketing pitches" that will increase signups. Again, what you want to do is power max the connection and impression of 1-on-1 interactivity with the prospective member.

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As a Member, I'll give you my secret members only phone number so you can call me and record your sexy fantasies for me to hear.
And I might surprise you and call or e-mail you back if you get me all turned on too.

(Neriah, you can use a free online service like eFax that has voice mail built in for this feature by the way)


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:)

sleazy- I'm impressed! way to use reverse pschycology to get her to show another pic:thumbsup :thumbsup

Very defensive!

This is "THE STUFF" you should be listening to, learning and absorbing

I have emailed him already...I want to pick his brain:Graucho

I was also suprised to find no larger pics.:(

FUCK!

Im so single!!!!:)

Yes, how many sample pics should we show....3?

Didn't you go out with Roger V from Pornkings.com?

thats what I call OWNED:winkwink:

what you should do is get someone like adult.com, Pornkings.com, Hawgscash or someone who knows the biz and have them build your site and put it in there program. on top of having your own site. make the most you can.

that way you get instant traffic. what type of program do you have?

LIKE THIS?
http://www.neriah.com/customer_extra...eriah_bath.jpg

Neriah would LOVE to be a part of the adult.com family!!:winkwink: :)