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cool1 05-24-2007 01:02 PM

CHARACTERS - Darren a 45 yr old grubby, broke, down and out, homeless, ex-stock broker and Susan a rich 21 yr old busty brunette sex addict.
SETTING – Darren lives under a bridge and washes windows of pasing cars for living expenses. Susan is in her car driving around looking for someone to fuck.
ACTION - Darren see Sharon's car approach and runs out to wash the window.
Susan being the ex addict she oggles Darren as he washes her window and when Darren comes around to collect the fee, Susan asks if he wants to wash her at home.
of course Darren is all for it, since it has been awhile since he last got his rocks off with someone who actually still had some teeth.
They arrive at Susan house and once inside Susan goes to get into something more comfortable. Susan comes back into the room wearing nothing but a hair clip.
She commands Darren to get to washing, Turns out Darren is also quite good with his tongue and in turn gives Susan the washing she deserves all over and in every hole.
Susan just can't get enough, after many positions with a bit of everything throwin and many orgasm later Susan drops Darren back off at the bridge where she found him and hands him a Quater saying thanks for the wash.

cool1 05-24-2007 01:03 PM

CHARACTERS - Darren a 45 yr old grubby, broke, down and out, homeless, ex-stock broker and Susan a rich 21 yr old busty brunette sex addict.
SETTING ? Darren lives under a bridge and washes windows of pasing cars for living expenses. Susan is in her car driving around looking for someone to fuck.
ACTION - Darren see Sharon's car approach and runs out to wash the window.
Susan being the ex addict she oggles Darren as he washes her window and when Darren comes around to collect the fee, Susan asks if he wants to wash her at home.
of course Darren is all for it, since it has been awhile since he last got his rocks off with someone who actually still had some teeth.
They arrive at Susan house and once inside Susan goes to get into something more comfortable. Susan comes back into the room wearing nothing but a hair clip.
She commands Darren to get to washing, Turns out Darren is also quite good with his tongue and in turn gives Susan the washing she deserves all over and in every hole.
Susan just can't get enough, after many positions with a bit of everything throwin and many orgasm later Susan drops Darren back off at the bridge where she found him and hands him a Quater saying thanks for the wash.

J. Falcon 05-24-2007 01:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by testpie (Post 12482467)
:1orglaugh That's fantastic.

Think of all the puns and jokes you could put it in - "Loins of pork", "Blow your chops off" and the good ol' "Why are you putting your dick in my bacon slicer?"...

:1orglaugh :1orglaugh :1orglaugh :1orglaugh

wyldworx 05-24-2007 01:19 PM

or one could do an end of football game gangbang scene involving players, coach and cheerleaders. Ensure that the gym equipment is utilized - and the girls are young and submissive.

OMG Jim 05-24-2007 02:24 PM

Looks like we've got some pretty creative and talented writers amongst us. The DEADLINE is not far away at midnight tonight (Pacific Time)

Come on and give it a shot. I know you've all got a fantasy or two that you would like to see acted out.

I've actually talked with someone at a company that might just use one of these ideas for a video shoot. Then you could see your scene "Cum To Life"! :pimp
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Choose 05-24-2007 02:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Choose (Post 12478766)
Lawrence Connor v 2, contact Lawrence Connor for the rest of the details, OK.

further details and elements and/or aspects of this can easily be developed

pornguy 05-24-2007 02:30 PM

I dont need the tickets, but would take 300$ instead.

The idea??? How about real reality.

a girl that works in a coffee shop, meets a guy. They make eye contact and stare a bit. he asks her out. Instead, they fuck in a car or truck or something. The next day, he walks in the shop with another girl, and she throws coffee on him.

Make it a real fucking movie instead of the typical porn flick.

wyldworx 05-24-2007 02:32 PM

a farmyard scene where all the creatures (humans) in the paddocks are reared for their sexual qualities. Set the scene by having a car enter the property containing a dominatrix and a midget sadist, who are looking to purchase a prime submissive slut. The Farmer explains to the pair of deviates that they are required to test drive, as there is no return policy.... and the porn is born.

Rochard 05-24-2007 02:41 PM

CHARACTERS – Wannabe webmaster, partially retarded, with huge tattoo of some ugly bird covering his entire chest and four totally hot babes.

SETTING – Loser webmaster wins contest to have sex with porn star.

ACTION - Loser webmaster unable to get it up, ends up getting poked up the but with a strap on dildo.

Oh wait, that's been done before.

SykkBoy 05-24-2007 02:48 PM

Would it be in poor taste to include farm animals?

wyldworx 05-24-2007 02:51 PM

it is not includingt farm animals, they are pasturised humans.

AdultInsider Cloner 05-24-2007 03:09 PM

how about I just authorize you to follow me around for a few weeks ;)

wyldworx 05-24-2007 03:37 PM

Thats a war on pandora in ya sig - I like it.

OMG Jim 05-24-2007 03:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AdultInsider Cloner (Post 12483357)
how about I just authorize you to follow me around for a few weeks ;)

Based on what I've seen and heard at the shows Cloner this might be the best idea so far. Does that mean filming too! :pimp

Choose 05-24-2007 04:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Choose (Post 12478766)
Lawrence Connor v 2, contact Lawrence Connor for the rest of the details, OK.

that's the one ya wanna go with fo shizzle :pimp :pimp :pimp :pimp :pimp :pimp

rapmaster 05-24-2007 11:24 PM

So you gonna announce the winner in a few?

J. Falcon 05-25-2007 06:29 AM

We're all waiting.

wyldworx 05-25-2007 06:41 AM

Time to bring on the stagemaster - he makes gimp man look tame.

OMG Jim 05-25-2007 08:10 AM

O.K. guys the Contest Winner will be announced during lunch hour. That's between 12noon and 1pm Eastern time so hold your horses guys.

Dwreck and I are going over all the entries now and this is going to be a tough choice. Thanks to everyone that participated and "GOOD LUCK" :)
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CIVMatt 05-25-2007 08:15 AM

pins n needles

J. Falcon 05-25-2007 08:29 AM

No matter who wins, this was a cool and original contest. Thanks!

Dwreck 05-25-2007 08:58 AM

Im now accepting bribes please contact me via icq! lol

fetishblog 05-25-2007 09:57 AM

Okay. It's 1pm Eastern. Where's the winner?

rapmaster 05-25-2007 10:32 AM

I hope I win.

OMG Jim 05-25-2007 10:36 AM

O.K. after much deliberation and a TOUGH ASS decision we have decided.

The WINNER

of the

"Pitch Me a Scene"

CONTEST

is
shermshack

with

"Tara's WILD Ride"


We want to express our appreciation to all that participated and would like to give an 'HONORABLE MENTION" to the following:

J. Falcon - Bank Heist Gets Sloppy
CIVMatt - Surprise Threesome
cool1 - Homeless Window Washer

Originality - wyldworx - The Butcher
Entertainment - donkevlar - Pick Up Gone Wrong

shermshack I will hit your up in a few! CONGRATULATIONS!

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rapmaster 05-25-2007 10:38 AM

Daam not even an honorable mention? I guess mine was a bit too grounded in reality, should have added an alien or T-Rex

rapmaster 05-25-2007 10:43 AM

Although I have to admit Shermshack's story was entertaining, but it seemed more like an adult story than a film idea.

nice work though, congrats :thumbsup

donkevlar 05-25-2007 11:01 AM

Nice, most entertaining. I'll take that.

CIVMatt 05-25-2007 11:03 AM

Congrats shermshack great job!

testpie 05-25-2007 11:07 AM

Well done to all who got a mention, and to sherm for winning. Still, if anyone wants to make my idea using a man in a tophat... :thumbsup

Bama 05-25-2007 11:09 AM

Characters
Rough and Rugged Looking Farmer
Sweet & Sexy Farmer's Wife
Nerdy Looking Salesman

Setting
Farm/Bedroom

Action
It's the traditional scene you'd imagine of a traveling salesman who's car has broken down near a remote farm late in the afternoon.

Farmer let's the salesman stay for dinner and spend the night and he'd take him to town in the morning

Cut to later in the evening where the salesman is watching the wife make dinner... bending over, thong/upskirts/downshirts glimpses - wife notices, enjoys the attention - husband appears clueless to what's going on around him.

Cut scene to later that night. Wife/Husband go off to bed, salesman goes to his room. Few hours later, salesman is awoken by the sounds of the husband snoring - decides to go pee and when looking for the bathroom walks into the couples room by accident. Wife notices and knowing the salesman likes her offers to have sex with the salesman.

"What about the husband" the salesman asks. "He'll wake up and murder me"!
"No he won't - he sleeps like a log" - "Don't believe me - just reach over to him and yank a hair off his ass - he won't wake up"

Salesman does and sure enough - the husband continues to snore so they fuck like rabbits right beside him - all the while, the husband continues to snore.

Salesman goes back to his room.

Few hours later - repeat above scene - different sexual positions/scenes
Few hours later - repeat scene.

Next time the salesman come in for the last romp of the night and plucks a hair off the ass of the husband - the husband sits up and says.

"Look Buddy, I don't mind taking you in for the night or giving you a ride into town, feeding you dinner or even if you bang my wife all night"..

"But do you gotta use my ass as a scoreboard"?

End Scene

truebluetalent 05-25-2007 11:42 AM

Damn! Just saw thread... :(

J. Falcon 05-25-2007 11:42 AM

Congrats shermshack

OMG Jim 05-25-2007 11:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by rapmaster (Post 12487538)
Although I have to admit Shermshack's story was entertaining, but it seemed more like an adult story than a film idea.

nice work though, congrats :thumbsup

Hey rapmaster your Characters and Setting were great for an adult scene but it is a very common one. I think it was the lack of a descriptive Action sequence that we missed.

Hey testpie your scene had some GREAT imagination but it kind of crossed over into the fantasy realm with the talking dog. It would take some good special effects to pull this off.

Thanks again to everyone for participating! :thumbsup

:Oh crap Sorry Bama but the contest ended at midnight last night but I've got to say that was a damn good variation with a twist on the Farmer's Daughter theme.
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CIVMatt 05-25-2007 11:50 AM

Hey sherm you using those passes?

cool1 05-25-2007 11:56 AM

Congrats shermshack :thumbsup
thank you AlmightyJim for the "HONORABLE MENTION" :)

rapmaster 05-25-2007 12:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AlmightyJim (Post 12487821)
Hey rapmaster your Characters and Setting were great for an adult scene but it is a very common one. I think it was the lack of a descriptive Action sequence that we missed.

Hey testpie your scene had some GREAT imagination but it kind of crossed over into the fantasy realm with the talking dog. It would take some good special effects to pull this off.

Thanks again to everyone for participating! :thumbsup

:Oh crap Sorry Bama but the contest ended at midnight last night but I've got to say that was a damn good variation with a twist on the Farmer's Daughter theme.
_

Heh alright, well thanks for the tip. I've never written any substantive adult stuff before, although I have done a few screenplays

Fun contest, hope there's something like it again in the future

Bama 05-25-2007 12:18 PM

Yeah, I saw that the contest had already ended but wanted to submit an idea anyways :)

Congrats Sherm!

wyldworx 05-25-2007 12:36 PM

I am guessing mine wasn't taken seriously.

wyldworx 05-25-2007 12:45 PM

congrats btw:thumbsup


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