But which one makes the best pizza?

1997....hmmmm. You know the Heinz Ketchup label is over a hundred years old and still outsells everyone. That impresses me.
I think maybe a few of you need to pay attention to those who know a lot more than you do.

planning on the newsletter. the cookie length is a good idea. thank you

wasn't aware of that site. and it certainly isn't targeted for adult websites. :2 cents:

interesting though.

i think this is a clever trick from mr.sleazydream, launch a bad looking site so everyone says it sucks and laughs at him, and then suddenly launch the real site design and setup, and get double the exposure. Clever!

honestly, in porn since when has design really been a serious factor in success?

it's about marketing. period. design comes later when there's disposable income.

I didn't read thru all of the pages but I do hope there was some flat out honesty. The site is designed like a train wreck. It's bad enough that most of the women aren't worth the effort to stick around, but the flow of the site and pure design is horrendous. Plus I don't care what most of the ignorant clowns say, spelling mistakes are unprofessional and portray your product as being the same. I'm hoping someone pointed it out because I am not going to waste my time reading thru everything, but it is spelled copyright!

hm im not sure i agree, maybe a few years ago, i think that now the users want to have some design, they can see if the pics look homemade , but im talking about my country now, not US.

I dont mean it needs alot of design, my favourite designer charges me like 300 for a whole site, and then it looks good. I just give him my mockup and then he fixes it for me. Im no designer , i work traffic, cant do it all!

could you show me examples of sites you think look better please

i really don't get the train wreck comment. i honestly only hear this from webmasters....

can you show me something better? do you mind explaining... no one has been able to do that


by the way - thru is spelled through :winkwink:

sure, i dont have in your niche though , but here is some he made:

http://norskemaria.com/
http://frekkefilmer.com/
http://www.svensksex.com/
http://norskeleona.com/
http://nakenprat.com/
http://www.svenskaslampor.com/
(its in norwegian and swedish)

here is some english versions...forgot about it

http://www.norskemaria.com/index-english.html
http://frekkefilmer.com/index-en.html
http://norskeleona.com/index-english.html

well i can comment on design esp since i don't understand the language.

basically all but one are identical - just different colors... pretty much the same layout. I tried everything NOT to have that layout. I know a lot of people think this is the only layout - i don't believe surfers think like that. I personally hate that layout cause EVERYONE and his dog uses it. the text is WAY too small and font is too simple...

http://nakenprat.com/ - you have to be kidding me - this is what I should be doing? Please tell me this is a joke. this is a disaster if I ever saw one. not clear at all and totally overcrowded. text way too small.



BUT that doesn't mean they don't sell, just means they really aren't original in my OPINION in any way shape form or fashion. The images are, the layouts are not. Well all but maybe the nakenprat one - it's a disaster in it's own special right...I can see why your designer charged you very little - they're all the same!!!!!!!!

okei sure, keep going, im sure your site will be a success...ill just join the club and tell you its a great site, im sure it will sell VERY well! Good luck!

can you tell me why you think those are fantastic and original? i mean the content is very cool, but that's not what we're talking about....

can you back it up or did you just shit on me cause you thought it was the cool thing to do?

I've tried to refrain from being insulting, but I am pretty much fed up with your being a total asshole towards many people whom have respectfully tried to give you good advice regarding your current train wreck site...

The straight truth... your "Yes Signals" website is an absolute, total, piece of shit.

After days, you haven't incorporated most of the suggested positive changes, but have instead engaged in non-stop nonsensical debates with Choker and others.

Even if this turns out to be a completely fabricated marketing ruse (and I doubt that you are smart or capable enough of pulling off such a thing by yourself), you irregardlessly still have made yourself out to be a rather stupid and ungracious, not to mention, despicable person.

While I once felt empathy for your nightclub failure, among your other recent failures (the land deal with J-Man, etc), I now understand why it was inevitable.

I understand now, that if you should have any future success in this business, it will be because of others, not because of your own intelligence and skills, since you have proven that you lack either.

ADG

the designs are not original but they are clean and the point is easily shown. Ok not on the nakenprat site (thats a free site and showing as many ads as possible), but on the paysites.

On http://www.yessignals.com you sell professional advice about how to pick up women, then i think the site need to look more professional also, and getting a designer to improve what you made yourself, by making a better logo, and generally lift it up one notch, would help.

Also i would add more seling points, example:
http://www.yessignals.com/PickUpLines.html
..here you say some pickuplines and then as me to join . Why should i join ? What do i get ? I would add a text that says for example "Do you want the complete guide? watch all our instructional videos? Then join here. Stuff like that

Huh ? why should i shit on you sleazydream for fun ? Would i have anything to gain ? of course not. I am not your competitor, nor do i have any bad feelings towards you. i was just suprised when i saw this site of yours, i have to admit i expected it to be better. Thats it.

dude - I spent a lot of time cutting movies, responding to this thread, and reworking my join page samples of which are posted here - which got shit on - by someone who when i checked his join page was an absolute total joke...

also working on the non porn version and the newsletter.

I HAVE been working with many of the comments. You can even see that in this thread.

I expect people to be able to back up their statements.....

not just shit on me cause it's fashionable. I back up what I say or I retract.

your site has an decent layout - not like most others....

i really don't see the train wreck comment.... yes the movies page needs work but seriously - what is wrong with http://www.yessignals.com/BodyLanguage.html ? it's clean, it highlights the yessignals and doesn't distract from what i'm trying to convey. HOW IS THAT A TRAINWRECK? DO YOU MIND EXPLAINING or are you limited to shitting on me and not backing it up?

cause that would say a lot about you........you don't seem to think i have the right to question anyone.............

I'm joining and hope to use my new skills to fuck a real girl very soon.

see that's a real comment. not a shot in the dark.
thank you.

I don't agree on the logo... I want it simple like that.... but i respect the advise. just as you don't agree on me thinking the text is too small on your site...


I do agree on the how to pick up a woman page. actually forgot about that one and def so need to upgrade it. thank you.


the info on the pick up lines is great actually.....THANK YOU.

that's helpful and not just kicking someone when they are down. :thumbsup

I don't think there's anything wrong with the layout of the site, but I do think it could use a little cleaning up. The amateur style design works in many cases, but I'm not so sure it will in this case. It's just my gut feeling.

In either event, take the professional route and have another design done for you, get someone to do some nice clean graphics and split test the two (or more) options to figure out for yourself exactly what converts better. Don't just let it sit as is without trying some different things out. Let the numbers be the deciding factor. Not people on the forum's opinions (nor your own for that matter)...

I'm not completely convinced you're selling the customers on the product as well as you could be either. Again, that's just my opinion. Might be worth talking to a good copy writer. Split test different sales copies too, and see what performs best. It may be a slow start, but you'll find what works best with a little time and in the long run it will pay off putting this little bit of research into play...

you're absolutely right about the testing... but even though the site looks small, there are hundreds of pages on this site in the free section. it deceiving...I'm actually getting some great comments on fixing up a few things within my budget....

Oh, the site is "copywrited"? :1orglaugh

I'm in the same boat. I think a lot of people are getting trolled hard.

I didn't read most of this thread, but I did give the site a good look and here are my thoughts:

1. I was a little confused about what you were selling. Is it advice or porn or both? It looks like both, but to me the tour is a little unclear. I took it to mean the tour was mostly just a new slant on a porn site. If you are selling advice maybe you need to make it a little more clear.

For example:
http://www.yessignals.com/WhatWomenReallyWant.html
are you going to tell us what women want? If so. maybe you should say so.

http://www.yessignals.com/WhereToPickUpAWoman.html
will you be telling us where to meet women?

Some of them have clear cut info like
http://www.yessignals.com/PhoneNumber.html
here it seems pretty clear that you will be giving out what these techniques are.

So maybe a little more on what exactly the site is going to teach me (that is, if you are really selling advice.)


2. I think your movies are way too long. Why join when I get 17 movies that are all about 15 minutes long?

To me they could server 2 purposes. First, if this is what I get inside, there I don't really see advice. I talk to women all the time to touch their hair or touch my arm or cross their legs, but they aren't giving me head 2 minutes later. So if you are selling advice, the movies send a little bit of a mixed signal. Second, There is plenty of hardcore action here, I could just jerk it to these movies and move on. So I would really need to be sold on what else the site is going to give me if I were to join it.

Maybe you could edit the movies to show off the signals, then cut to the a few seconds of the action and say something like, "We teach you how to properly read and act on the yes signals so that you can turn a conversation into action." or something like that. As it sits, why would I need to read the signals? It looks like I just show up and the girl will give me head :) Now if the site can teach me to make that happen, I'm joining right now! :)

Anyway, just my observations.

That's good and all, but only good if you get their eyes that far. I'd consider losing the splash page, and getting a little more text on the index. As cliche as it is, the whole "testimonial" thing works, might want to look into slapping some bs testimonials from "successfully made pua's" on there too. Regardless of how much content there is deep inside the site, it appears a little thin...

just a couple suggestions you might want to look give some consideration.it's your baby though, so ultimately it's your call...

Another good point. Kind of steps in line with what I was at with the "thinness" comment and the getting more text in place.

great review.....

i'm selling advise and info on yessignals. I see the porn as a bonus.

talking with Will76 and am going to be adding an "about" page on the toolbar describing that you're talking about there in that.

I agree I do need some tweeking on some pages on the sales pitches. Some of those pages as you said are better than others... i'll play with that

I'm experimenting with the movie length at the begining... running with the idea to keep surfers longer on the site.


those are good suggestions with the movies on the editing....my purpose is to get them posted though and I'm under the impression tubes want movies as close to a real porn movie as possible - thus the length and such... i will be growing with sales pitches in them though.

insiteful review - thank you for your thoughts... I'll be using some of them

my goal from the start was to use as little text as possible and be as visual as possible with this.


less is more in my book


anyway bed time

I totally understand what you're going for, and I'm not suggesting you drown out the pages with massive amounts of text. But say on the main page, just a paragraph or two that immediately explains to the surfer what you're delivering and why they absolutely need to get in on this information NOW would do some good.

From the index clicking the thumbs is an obvious next move which I'm sure most will take, but when I got to a page like this http://yessignals.com/PelvicTilt.html for instance, to be honest, I didn't even realize that I could click the girls for more information. Until I took a second closer look. Just a little bit of text would have cleared that up.

Sleazy, you seriously need to wake the fuck up. Everything about this site is complete garbage. Design, coding, content, spelling and fucking literally every and anything else needed to make a website. How can you work in porn for this long and not fucking realize this? You seriously need to accept the fact that all of your "Friends" could give a fuck about you anymore, lied to your face with a smile and told you this site looked good and would do well.

Anyone with half a fucking brain and the ability to spend a few minutes browsing websites can see all of the problems with yours. I'm not even going to bother going into specifics about what's wrong. You've already made it 100% clear that you've got it all figured out and just need more $ to make this piece of 17 times used over tampon into a gold mine.

Most importantly the biggest failure of this site is your inafuckingbility (prolly get less drama about that typo than "copywrite") to take constructive (Or any?) criticism, say thanks, shut your fucking mouth and learn from it. That's probably the exact reason your site looks the way it does. I'm sure your friends thought something like .. "Man fuck, if i tell him it looks stupid he's gonna get pissed off and bitch and moan at me for the next hour and probably call me stupid ... really don't wanna deal with that =/. I'll just tell him it looks good."Choker and Will76 have probably been your biggest "Friends" in this entire thread. A LOT better friends than the other fucking idiots who keep congratulating you on this piece of shit.

I hope all of you people who are feeding Sleazy that shit as an easy out feel great about yourselves. How could you watch a "friend" of yours ruin himself like this? You're taking a man who's already bankrupt and encouraging him to go down a road that's only going to make his life financially worse. You're all bigger pieces of shits than this fucking site. Imo each and every fucking one of you owe him a personal apology and should offer him some sort of free service (jesus fucking christ, hopefully design) to make it up to him.

Your theory that this concept is new and unique is ridiculous at the least. The "Idea" alone is definitely nowhere near good enough to carry a site in itself. This is going to take a well built/designed site just as much (if not more) as any adult site out there.

You're gonna absolutely HATE this part ... The fact that you think the girls (porn stars being paid to pretend) in those videos are passing off real "Yes Signals" is beyond pathetic and makes me realize that you're probably the person responsible for it. My reason behind that is pretty obvious ... You are not a person who knows about how to pick up girls. You should NOT be the person in charge of deciding what a real signal from a female is. Your attempt is a slap in the face to the entire process of guys getting laid. Find an Alpha Male (You can Google that, like everyone who wants to learn about real signals will do for free.)to help you. Any man who has game knows how to turn a self directed insult into something good and keep moving forward with a girl. You've obviously shown in this post that you're very incapable of taking criticism and moving forward. Now ... your brain is telling you "this guy's a fucking idiot, what the fuck does that have to do with girls!" and that is EXACTLY why you need help.

You seriously need to stop spending your time telling people how stupid they are for pointing out the OBVIOUS problems with your website and get some fucking work done on it. Here's my last idea for you. You're going to get 0 messages from me again in this thread, ever, so instead of replying to this message ......................... It's FUCKING COPYRIGHT U DIPSHIT. Go fucking fix it. This is one of the biggest disgraces to old school I've seen in awhile.

OMFG sleazy the fact you are going to rework like 90% of the site based on suggestions speaks volumes....

means you dont have a clue wtf you are doing... sheesh...

ALSO, the right spelling is SEEN, not SCENE or SCEEN or whatever crap youve been typing


you are a fucking idiot, people told you days ago to fix copyright, it will take 5mins, and you are here babbling along.. that first typo throws people off.. if i EVER go to a website and see COPY WRITE im not even proceeding..

get off gfy, and fix your site, you spend hours here everyday babbling when you could be fixing your site and learning how to spell

I wanted to write something but I see my girlfriend has a limp wrist. Need to go.

false alarm, she said she was only relaxing while watching TV

bdw what are you using for this site? Dreamweaver? Notepad? Also coding is terrible. Tables??? It's fucking 2010, get yourself a CMS. Get a free wordpress template, will look better than this.

How much research if any did you bother to do? With 10 seconds and Google I managed to find at least 5 of them dedicated to JUST body language. :1orglaugh

:1orglaugh:1orglaugh

no, its real. It's not a joke or stunt.