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Cherry7 · 06-28-2012, 03:18 AM

Script for our next movie, any suggestions?

Two girls, only solo level, one day shoot...

A JUNG GIRL

Psychiatrist Room

HELEN lies on a dark Psychiatrist couch, in a dark room. She nervously touches her face and body.

Helen

I remember as a child showing a boy...

WOODS DAY EXT

HELEN walks into bushes and there she hesitates. HELEN shows her breasts to the camera, then her bottom and pussy.

PSYCHIATRIST ROOM

PSYCHIATRIST

Black

HELEN

White

PSYCHIATRIST

Day

HELEN

Blackness

PSYCHIATRIST

Girl

HELEN

Naked

PSYCHIATRIST

Drink

HELEN

Naked

COCKTAIL BAR

HELEN is sitting at the bar a BAR WOMAN pours her a drink, HELEN's dress disappears, BARMAN pours another drink, HELEN's clothes disappear until all her clothes have gone and she is naked

PSYCHIATRIST ROOM

HELEN

My father used to spank me

ROOM INT NIGHT

In black and white old cinema style, HELEN pulls up her dress and down her knickers and bends over

PSYCHIATRIST ROOM

HELEN

I love looking at myself

ROOM INT NIGHT

HELEN Looking at herself in the mirror dressed just in knickers and bra, she undresses and dresses.

PSYCHIATRIST ROOM

HELEN

I had this dream where I am in prison

Prison Cell DAY INT

MAGDA enters the cell and orders HELEN to undress. HELEN slowly undresses. MAGDA washes HELEN with a sponge and dries her off. MAGDA handcuffs HELEN against the bars.

PSYCHIATRIST ROOM

HELEN

Then this other dream I am in a doctors surgery

DOCTORS ROOM INT

HELEN is striped and put in a gynecological chair. We see HELEN's face as the suction vibrator comes closer, we see the vibrator and then HELEN's pussy, MAGDA's face, MAGDA attaches a suction vibrator to HELEN's pussy. HELEN clamps on vibrators to her nipples, MAGDA switches the vibrators on.

PSYCHIATRIST ROOM

HELEN gets up, puts on her coat and leaves.

PSYCHIATRIST

Same time next week

jimmycooper · 06-28-2012, 04:22 AM

Are you looking for casting suggestions?

Lou Charmelle, Angell Summers, or Liza del Sierra would be great.

bronco67 · 06-28-2012, 05:30 AM

looks pretty boring, if its porn. Here's a good script for you to shoot.

White room

20 super hot girls pour oil all over themselves and caress each other's juicy, round butts. They all make a giant pile in the middle of the room.

One guy with a 10 inch dick walks in and jumps on the pile, sticking it in any open hole he can find. He shoots 5 loads.

The end.

Tijuana_Tom · 06-28-2012, 05:35 AM

When she gets up to leave the psychiatrists office have a wet stain on the chair/couch.

Cherry7 · 06-28-2012, 05:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tijuana_Tom

When she gets up to leave the psychiatrists office have a wet stain on the chair/couch.

Yeah, something like that, or butt plug... some twist would be good

DamianJ · 06-28-2012, 06:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cherry7

Yeah, something like that, or butt plug... some twist would be good

A massive turd?

TGITC would buy it then.

phypon · 06-28-2012, 10:24 AM

Personally I don't like dreamscapes in porn. I think that by doing so and cutting back forth from the dream/memory to the present breaks the action up too much and diverts attention away from what the viewer wants to see. Also, dreamscapes in porn suck because it's a fantasy within a fantasy for the viewer. The viewer is already placing themselves into their own fantasy by watching. They are trying to make it as real for them as possible. To find out you're in someone else's fantasy makes it seem "less real" (if that makes sense).

I was board so I changed it a bit. Not finished or polished. Like I said, I was bored so here is a read for you:
__________________________________________

OPENING

BLACK SCREEN:

The sound of a woman walking in high heels at a normal pace is heard. (click click click click click click click) The sound suddenly stops.

HELLEN

Uggghhh...(sighing)

OUTSIDE HOTEL LOUNGE:

The camera opens focused on Hellen's broken red high heel shoe and slowly pans up her body. (Hellen wearing business attire with skirt)

CUT TO:

INSIDE HOTEL LOUNGE:

Hellen sitting at the bar on a stool with her foot on her knee rubbing her foot. The broken shoe atop the bar.

Magda

Rough day, hon? (sitting on stool next to Hellen)

hellen

Almost in tears looking at magda nods her head in agreement

MAGDA

Must be a man. They'll do that to you.

hellen

Yup. I hate them. I'm done with them. (quickly wipes tear from her cheek)

MAGDA

Awww. I'm right there with you, hon. (turns body towards Hellen and begins caressing her shoeless foot)

MAGDA

We've all been there, hon. It get's better.

HELLEN

It's not so much him. I really liked these shoes. It's just one of those days where nothing seems to (turns to grab her glass of wine and spills it on her shirt)

HELLEN

Ugh. (frustrated sigh) Seems to go right.

MAGDA

Oh dear!

The two women look at each other, pause and then laugh. Magda grabs Hellen's hand.

MAGDA

Come on, hon. I have a beautiful blouse you can wear.

The two get up and walk to the exit. A sexy walk with their tight round asses bouncing from side to side. Both women are in short business skirts and Hellen is shoeless. The camera is focused on theirasses.

CUT TO:

Magda and Hellen walking down the hotel hallway towards Magda's room. Magda holding Hellen's hand.

MAGDA

When I have a bad day I do something I would't normally do. Something crazy.

HELLEN

I don't understand.

MAGDA

You know, something rebellious. Something taboo. Live out a fantasy. Break the rules.

The two are at the door of the hotel room. Hellen stares at Magda with wonderment and curiosity as Magda is opening the door.

CUT TO:

Inside hotel room. Two beds inside the room. Magda is sitting on one bed and Hellen is sitting on the other. They are facing each other.

Cherry7 · 06-28-2012, 10:52 AM

Shame there is no sex in your movie, it would be a 12 certificate.

phypon · 06-28-2012, 10:54 AM

Like I said, I didn't finish it. Think you can see where it was heading though. Was just trying to throw some ideas out there for you since you asked for suggestions.

Cherry7 · 06-28-2012, 10:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DamianJ

A massive turd?

TGITC would buy it then.

I am a great fan of some of your writing and I was wondering if you would like to write a spoof of the "Making of " films, you know how everyone is so fucking talented the, director is great the actor etc...?
Of course showing the opposite in a funny way.....

Cherry7 · 06-30-2012, 12:31 PM

Choosing our studio sets...

And the actors .....

06-28-2012, 03:18 AM	#1
Cherry7 Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: UK Posts: 3,564	Script for our next movie Script for our next movie, any suggestions? Two girls, only solo level, one day shoot... A JUNG GIRL Psychiatrist Room HELEN lies on a dark Psychiatrist couch, in a dark room. She nervously touches her face and body. Helen I remember as a child showing a boy... WOODS DAY EXT HELEN walks into bushes and there she hesitates. HELEN shows her breasts to the camera, then her bottom and pussy. PSYCHIATRIST ROOM PSYCHIATRIST Black HELEN White PSYCHIATRIST Day HELEN Blackness PSYCHIATRIST Girl HELEN Naked PSYCHIATRIST Drink HELEN Naked COCKTAIL BAR HELEN is sitting at the bar a BAR WOMAN pours her a drink, HELEN's dress disappears, BARMAN pours another drink, HELEN's clothes disappear until all her clothes have gone and she is naked PSYCHIATRIST ROOM HELEN My father used to spank me ROOM INT NIGHT In black and white old cinema style, HELEN pulls up her dress and down her knickers and bends over PSYCHIATRIST ROOM HELEN I love looking at myself ROOM INT NIGHT HELEN Looking at herself in the mirror dressed just in knickers and bra, she undresses and dresses. PSYCHIATRIST ROOM HELEN I had this dream where I am in prison Prison Cell DAY INT MAGDA enters the cell and orders HELEN to undress. HELEN slowly undresses. MAGDA washes HELEN with a sponge and dries her off. MAGDA handcuffs HELEN against the bars. PSYCHIATRIST ROOM HELEN Then this other dream I am in a doctors surgery DOCTORS ROOM INT HELEN is striped and put in a gynecological chair. We see HELEN's face as the suction vibrator comes closer, we see the vibrator and then HELEN's pussy, MAGDA's face, MAGDA attaches a suction vibrator to HELEN's pussy. HELEN clamps on vibrators to her nipples, MAGDA switches the vibrators on. PSYCHIATRIST ROOM HELEN gets up, puts on her coat and leaves. PSYCHIATRIST Same time next week __________________ My Neighbour Butterfly PORN-The Musical The Long Goodbye Cinema Erotique

06-28-2012, 04:22 AM	#2
jimmycooper Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: May 2010 Location: Manhattan Posts: 4,016	Are you looking for casting suggestions? Lou Charmelle, Angell Summers, or Liza del Sierra would be great. __________________

06-28-2012, 05:30 AM	#3
bronco67 Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 29,035	looks pretty boring, if its porn. Here's a good script for you to shoot. White room 20 super hot girls pour oil all over themselves and caress each other's juicy, round butts. They all make a giant pile in the middle of the room. One guy with a 10 inch dick walks in and jumps on the pile, sticking it in any open hole he can find. He shoots 5 loads. The end. __________________ Last edited by bronco67; 06-28-2012 at 05:34 AM..

06-28-2012, 10:52 AM	#8
Cherry7 Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: UK Posts: 3,564	Shame there is no sex in your movie, it would be a 12 certificate. __________________ My Neighbour Butterfly PORN-The Musical The Long Goodbye Cinema Erotique

06-30-2012, 12:31 PM	#11
Cherry7 Confirmed User Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: UK Posts: 3,564	The Set Choosing our studio sets... And the actors ..... __________________ My Neighbour Butterfly PORN-The Musical The Long Goodbye Cinema Erotique

06-28-2012, 05:35 AM	#4
Tijuana_Tom So Fucking Banned Industry Role: Join Date: May 2011 Location: 90210 Posts: 668	When she gets up to leave the psychiatrists office have a wet stain on the chair/couch.

06-28-2012, 10:24 AM	#7
phypon Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 440	Personally I don't like dreamscapes in porn. I think that by doing so and cutting back forth from the dream/memory to the present breaks the action up too much and diverts attention away from what the viewer wants to see. Also, dreamscapes in porn suck because it's a fantasy within a fantasy for the viewer. The viewer is already placing themselves into their own fantasy by watching. They are trying to make it as real for them as possible. To find out you're in someone else's fantasy makes it seem "less real" (if that makes sense). I was board so I changed it a bit. Not finished or polished. Like I said, I was bored so here is a read for you: __________________________________________ OPENING BLACK SCREEN: The sound of a woman walking in high heels at a normal pace is heard. (click click click click click click click) The sound suddenly stops. HELLEN Uggghhh...(sighing) OUTSIDE HOTEL LOUNGE: The camera opens focused on Hellen's broken red high heel shoe and slowly pans up her body. (Hellen wearing business attire with skirt) CUT TO: INSIDE HOTEL LOUNGE: Hellen sitting at the bar on a stool with her foot on her knee rubbing her foot. The broken shoe atop the bar. Magda Rough day, hon? (sitting on stool next to Hellen) hellen Almost in tears looking at magda nods her head in agreement MAGDA Must be a man. They'll do that to you. hellen Yup. I hate them. I'm done with them. (quickly wipes tear from her cheek) MAGDA Awww. I'm right there with you, hon. (turns body towards Hellen and begins caressing her shoeless foot) MAGDA We've all been there, hon. It get's better. HELLEN It's not so much him. I really liked these shoes. It's just one of those days where nothing seems to (turns to grab her glass of wine and spills it on her shirt) HELLEN Ugh. (frustrated sigh) Seems to go right. MAGDA Oh dear! The two women look at each other, pause and then laugh. Magda grabs Hellen's hand. MAGDA Come on, hon. I have a beautiful blouse you can wear. The two get up and walk to the exit. A sexy walk with their tight round asses bouncing from side to side. Both women are in short business skirts and Hellen is shoeless. The camera is focused on theirasses. CUT TO: Magda and Hellen walking down the hotel hallway towards Magda's room. Magda holding Hellen's hand. MAGDA When I have a bad day I do something I would't normally do. Something crazy. HELLEN I don't understand. MAGDA You know, something rebellious. Something taboo. Live out a fantasy. Break the rules. The two are at the door of the hotel room. Hellen stares at Magda with wonderment and curiosity as Magda is opening the door. CUT TO: Inside hotel room. Two beds inside the room. Magda is sitting on one bed and Hellen is sitting on the other. They are facing each other.

06-28-2012, 10:54 AM	#9
phypon Confirmed User Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 440	Like I said, I didn't finish it. Think you can see where it was heading though. Was just trying to throw some ideas out there for you since you asked for suggestions.