Can ayoen test our new pulic tour at onlytease.com

[onlytease]

Hi Guys,

We're currently re-doing the Onlytease public tour, giving it a bit of a fresher look and feel.

To access the tour, go to: test.onlytease.com

To view it, you'll need to login in with this username and password:

username: otmember

password: otmember

We're looking for technical feedback on the tour, trying to gauge what the end users experience is like on a wide variety of platforms. Also anything you think we should change to improve it.

Cheers Paul.

[papill0n]

ayoen is not here atm sorry

[sitesurfer70]

Awesome design!

[bean-aid]

It just makes no sense to me whatsoever to put on your *pre* join form ( http://www.only-opaques.com/t1/join ) RECURRING. Why? you've been in this how long and you want to state that a subscription recurrs... in a very obvious manner... oye vey!

[Oracle Porn]

Ok I'll start.

1) 2 header tabs, too much, specially when the second one is saying that there are no models online. remove 2nd header tab.

2) the effect on those moving images does nothing for me. it's also very slow on my pc and I have 8gb of ram. I would either switch the effect or just make a different layout to show a bit of your best or newest content

3) "We specialize in the erotic - not the extreme" why do you feel you need to mention what you dont specialize in? removing "not the extreme" will be much better. It's never good to end a statment with something even slightly negative. I think the surfer browsing the tour can see for themselves.

4) typography - header titles are too big compared to the thumbs on the pages and even the important info like how many pics/vids per set.

5) social logos way too big imho.

this is just for a brief look at the main page.

p.s. - just clicked the join page, it's confusing as fuck, after you figure out what to do on the join page, you get time shifted to 1995 with ccbill's join page.

[V_RocKs]

Having the cams logo and the sites logo one on top of the other is just gay... Don't do that.

Latest video updates - movie duration and update date have too much spacing... looks unconnected. Disjointed...

On home page look at recently added models... that is much better spacing for the meta data...

In the what is OT? spot you have:

"You won't find blatant nudity or in-your-face genitalia like you can on other adult sites."

Don't use the word CAN! Who ever wrote your copy sucks ass... Change can to do, or will.

Again:
"What you will find is beautiful women waiting to tempt and tease you."

You don't use is because that is singular... You use are because they will find multiple beautiful women...

"What you will find are beautiful women waiting to tempt and tease you."

If you don't like how it rolls off of the tongue you have to rewrite the entire thing.

In that sentence you mentioned women and then start the next sentence with "The girls..." which is confusing... Are they women or girls?

The rest of the paragraph just goes to complete shit. Especially the ending sentence...

Don't even get me started on the second paragraph.

I don't mind the social buttons so big next to that text.. But the descriptive text could be bolder and better spaced to fill up more space...

The social at the bottom need the text to be moved down to match the perceived top of the social buttons.

The video kinda sucks... reminds me of clips that were just thrown together... where is the tease the text talked about?

Join page: I would switch up the text under the site pics to be read from one to the next so:

Join OnlyAllSites For Unlimited Access... | Or, Join OnlyTease + OnlyMelanie & OnlyCarla Too!

Then your click icons will all lineup and no longer look disjointed.

And... Now send me a pass to vrocks at gmail so I can spank it!

[onlytease]

Thanks all for the feedback - all good comments