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lezinterracial · 05-22-2013, 03:12 PM

Tips for writing erotic stories? I have written a few stories involving interracial lesbians. My friend read them and said they suck. I do agree.

I have read on a site about horror stories that you should just keep writing. I am gonna be doing that. Anything else?

xNetworx · 05-22-2013, 03:21 PM

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Let him be your guide to understanding the creation of truly erotic literature.

Relentless · 05-22-2013, 03:35 PM

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$5 submissions · 05-22-2013, 04:17 PM

I don't write erotica but here is what works for me

1) GET THE ATTENTION OF THE READER: The title must slap the reader's eyeballs

2) QUICKLY CONNECT WITH A NEED: For the reader to read your stuff completely, you have to quickly filter the reader based on the NEED your text addresses. In other words, make it clear that you 'get' the reader.

3) SHOW THE READER THAT YOU HAVE THE ANSWER TO HIS/HER NEEDS: Don't say it, SHOW IT. Use examples.

4) CALL TO ACTION - All content, even 'informative' content, must CALL the reader to action or else it is worthless content.

lezinterracial · 05-22-2013, 04:33 PM

Thanks for all the input. Kind of fun thinking of scenarios. Writing it down and describing the sexual situations seem to be the difficult part.

bronco67 · 05-22-2013, 04:37 PM

No one can teach you to be erotic. Either you are or you aren't.

_Richard_ · 05-22-2013, 04:38 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by lezinterracial

Thanks for all the input. Kind of fun thinking of scenarios. Writing it down and describing the sexual situations seem to be the difficult part.

that's because you're being all writer about it

step 1:

go to porn site

step 2:

find needed niche

step 3:

watch and be.. 'a-mused'

huck huck huck

seriously tho

Colmike9 · 05-22-2013, 04:38 PM

Stick to MLA, don't repeat words, be descriptive but don't overdo it, good grammar is huge, have one or two fun twists that are also hot, think about what you fantasize about, everyone knows how sex feels and positions so don't make it boring with those details, paint a good picture of what is going on and keep it consistent, etc.

btw, I was kidding about MLA unless necessary

helterskelter808 · 05-22-2013, 06:01 PM

Pretty sure he's talking about writing actual stories, guys; not splog posts.

CaptainHowdy · 05-22-2013, 06:04 PM

lezinterracial · 05-22-2013, 07:16 PM

I do need to pick up a copy of "Lady Chatterly's Lover". I hate to admit I haven't read it. Timeless storyline of opposites attract.

Maybe I can copy the old recycled sitcoms. Black woman and white woman stuck in an elevator - lez sex ensues, Good white girl has evil twin that seduces all her asian friends - lez sex ensues, interracial couple goes to Hawaii and find a cursed tiki idol - lez sex ensues.

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lezinterracial Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 3,064	Tips for writing erotic porn? Tips for writing erotic stories? I have written a few stories involving interracial lesbians. My friend read them and said they suck. I do agree. I have read on a site about horror stories that you should just keep writing. I am gonna be doing that. Anything else? __________________ Live Sex Shows Last edited by lezinterracial; 05-22-2013 at 03:18 PM..

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$5 submissions I help you SUCCEED Industry Role: Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: The Pearl of the Orient Seas Posts: 32,195	I don't write erotica but here is what works for me 1) GET THE ATTENTION OF THE READER: The title must slap the reader's eyeballs 2) QUICKLY CONNECT WITH A NEED: For the reader to read your stuff completely, you have to quickly filter the reader based on the NEED your text addresses. In other words, make it clear that you 'get' the reader. 3) SHOW THE READER THAT YOU HAVE THE ANSWER TO HIS/HER NEEDS: Don't say it, SHOW IT. Use examples. 4) CALL TO ACTION - All content, even 'informative' content, must CALL the reader to action or else it is worthless content. __________________ Need a NON-ADULT income stream? We build your YOUTUBE CHANNEL for only $20 per video! For Hire: $3/hour or $400 per month Marketing Specialist Virtual Assistants

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Colmike9 (>^_^)b Industry Role: Join Date: Dec 2011 Posts: 7,223	Stick to MLA, don't repeat words, be descriptive but don't overdo it, good grammar is huge, have one or two fun twists that are also hot, think about what you fantasize about, everyone knows how sex feels and positions so don't make it boring with those details, paint a good picture of what is going on and keep it consistent, etc. btw, I was kidding about MLA unless necessary __________________ Join the BEST cam affiliate program on the internet! I've referred over $1.7mil in spending this past year, you should join in. I make a lot more money in the medical field in a lab now, fuck you guys. Don't ask me to come back, but do join Chaturbate in my sig, it still makes bank without me touching shit for years.. Last edited by Colmike9; 05-22-2013 at 04:41 PM..

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lezinterracial Confirmed User Industry Role: Join Date: Jul 2012 Posts: 3,064	I do need to pick up a copy of "Lady Chatterly's Lover". I hate to admit I haven't read it. Timeless storyline of opposites attract. Maybe I can copy the old recycled sitcoms. Black woman and white woman stuck in an elevator - lez sex ensues, Good white girl has evil twin that seduces all her asian friends - lez sex ensues, interracial couple goes to Hawaii and find a cursed tiki idol - lez sex ensues. __________________ Live Sex Shows