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NakedWomenTime · 09-30-2016, 02:16 PM

Hi Guys

I have written a blog post called 8 Good Reasons to Get Hot Camgirls Naked.

What do you think of it?

Thanks

plaster · 09-30-2016, 02:20 PM

Gfy doesn't need to read your blog posts

NakedWomenTime · 09-30-2016, 02:34 PM

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Originally Posted by plaster

Gfy doesn't need to read your blog posts

I'm sure some will be interested. If you aren't then no worries, but I'm sure some will be.

kane · 09-30-2016, 02:47 PM

Here are my 2cents.

1. I like the idea of writing something that tells readers why they should check out cams. It's a good idea in general.

2. There really isn't 8 distinct reasons here. Reasons 1 and 4 are basically the same. To me, reasons 3 and 5 are very similar and could be combined into one. I understand you are going for a Buzzfeed-style headline, but you could condense it down to say, 5 or 6 reasons and make the headline something like "The five hottest reasons to get a cam girl naked."

3. Personally, I wouldn't mention helping the girls with their careers. Sure, most people, at least deep down, realize these girls are there to earn money, but when you tell people up front you will basically be this girl's sugar daddy it may turn some guys off.

4. Reason 2 where you talk about body types is a good idea, but I would change it to say something like, "Cam girls come in all shapes and sizes. No matter if you are looking for a girl with a fit, tight body, a curvy, thick girl with a round ass, a BBW, or a petite spinner, you will have no problem finding a hottie that turns you on." Many people who visit cam sites (and porn in general) are looking for different types of women so you might want to mention that they can find anything they are looking for.

Anyway, overall I like it and think it is a good idea, but just had a few ideas I wanted to share. I hope they help. Good luck with the blog.

astronaut x · 09-30-2016, 02:49 PM

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Originally Posted by NakedWomenTime

I'm sure some will be interested. If you aren't then no worries, but I'm sure some will be.

get the fuck out of here with that shit.

NakedWomenTime · 09-30-2016, 03:12 PM

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Originally Posted by kane

Anyway, overall I like it and think it is a good idea, but just had a few ideas I wanted to share. I hope they help. Good luck with the blog.

Yes, thanks for the comments, they help a lot. I have a lot more blog posts to write so I will take your comments into account when writing these.

j3rkules · 09-30-2016, 03:13 PM

You may rather use bulled lists within a sentence. Other than that I would add some sexy pictures to make your posts look more attractive.

mikeet · 09-30-2016, 03:32 PM

You should of just said.. Over time, yer gonna make some new female friends that will do whatever the fuck you want

oppoten · 09-30-2016, 09:33 PM

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Originally Posted by jerkules

bulled lists

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kane Too lazy to set a custom title Join Date: Aug 2001 Location: portland, OR Posts: 20,684	Here are my 2cents. 1. I like the idea of writing something that tells readers why they should check out cams. It's a good idea in general. 2. There really isn't 8 distinct reasons here. Reasons 1 and 4 are basically the same. To me, reasons 3 and 5 are very similar and could be combined into one. I understand you are going for a Buzzfeed-style headline, but you could condense it down to say, 5 or 6 reasons and make the headline something like "The five hottest reasons to get a cam girl naked." 3. Personally, I wouldn't mention helping the girls with their careers. Sure, most people, at least deep down, realize these girls are there to earn money, but when you tell people up front you will basically be this girl's sugar daddy it may turn some guys off. 4. Reason 2 where you talk about body types is a good idea, but I would change it to say something like, "Cam girls come in all shapes and sizes. No matter if you are looking for a girl with a fit, tight body, a curvy, thick girl with a round ass, a BBW, or a petite spinner, you will have no problem finding a hottie that turns you on." Many people who visit cam sites (and porn in general) are looking for different types of women so you might want to mention that they can find anything they are looking for. Anyway, overall I like it and think it is a good idea, but just had a few ideas I wanted to share. I hope they help. Good luck with the blog.

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mikeet this & that Industry Role: Join Date: May 2005 Location: Beer City Posts: 5,304	You should of just said.. Over time, yer gonna make some new female friends that will do whatever the fuck you want